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Approved Coconut Application [Approved - Dinomono]
Started by EldritchCoconut

OOC

Minecraft Username: EldritchCoconut

Are you at least 18 years old?: yes 😼

Have you read the rules? (Link): yes I have

(Optional) How did you hear about Avalore?: n/a

(Max. 1) Were you referred by someone? If so, please provide their in-game username:n/a

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins):

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)? (250 word minimum - please make sure to include at least three references to our lore in your response, with two coming from different pages in the Compendium.  Two of the three selected should also be in-depth, avoid simply name-dropping lore terms. Tie the terms into your character's backstory. Why are they important to them?)

Sam Min was in his own world for a moment, he held his pet cat, Bam, on his lap her fur was splattered with shades of oranges on top of midnight black fur. The man gently petted her pretty deep in his thoughts, he had never been this far from home, from his small village... it made him pretty anxious not being able to hear the ocean splashing against each other every morning when he rose out of bed, a sound he never once thought he would miss since he used to dread each day when he got up to do errands around town, fishing up crabs, checking on the lobster cages... and now here he is, missing all of it..! But the only chore he never minded was feeding Bam every day and its been only four years since he got her, his parents had found her when they were out fishing and she was meowing for help up on a palm tree. He missed when she was as small as a pebble, he would look down at her and let out an exhausted sigh before noticing the woman speaking to him, his long ears quickly dropped as he started to panic. Oh god, he totally ignored this nice lady, gah! "Oh uh, sorry what uh-" He looked around trying to recall what she had said to him before it finally pieced together like a puzzle. "Ahem, sorry I got distracted haha, well that's a pretty tough question. I have to think about it..." He tapped his chin for a bit before speaking once again. "I would have to say... I'm still pretty young and I want to get more out there! We live in such a big world and all I'm doing with my life is getting pinched by crabs... I want to do something big and amazing or be some kind of hero.. I think..! I know its selfish but I want nothing more than people remembering me for all the good I did." 



Character Name: Sam Min

Character Race: Arsa Sidhe

Character Age: 32

Brief Physical Description: Long honey blonde hair that he ties up in a side braid, dark tanned skin, and yellow eyes, he has a soft face but attempts to make himself look "rougher" by furrowing his eyebrows.

Hello! I'm Dinomono and I'll be reviewing this application, there are a few things that'll need to be adressed before I can approve you.

"...he held his pet tressym..."

  • While it's something you can do, having a pet tressym shouldn't come from your backstory, but from events and developments within your character's present in the Spire. A regular cat would be no problem, but the tressym specifically is a rare enough creature for it to not be feasible.

"...he had never been this far from home, from his clan of the moon."

  • Your character cannot actually be part of Great Clan Moon, they would belong to a minor clan that serves under them within their territory.

Once changes have been made, please respond to this thread so that we may continue.

 

🙈🙉🙊

- Signed by Moogy

Dinomono:

Hello! I'm Dinomono and I'll be reviewing this application, there are a few things that'll need to be adressed before I can approve you.

"...he held his pet tressym..."

  • While it's something you can do, having a pet tressym shouldn't come from your backstory, but from events and developments within your character's present in the Spire. A regular cat would be no problem, but the tressym specifically is a rare enough creature for it to not be feasible.

"...he had never been this far from home, from his clan of the moon."

  • Your character cannot actually be part of Great Clan Moon, they would belong to a minor clan that serves under them within their territory.

Once changes have been made, please respond to this thread so that we may continue.

 

Oops guess I was reading over the lore too fast, I fixed these issues!

- Welcome! -

Your whitelist application is approved. The server runs on 1.20.4 and you can connect using the IP: mc.avalore.net.

Here's some Guides on how our main in-game plugins can be used, and our Mechanics page for an overview on how the system works.

Consider creating a profile for your character in the Character Profiles section of the forums!

If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me or another member of our Community team either on the forums or through our Discord.

🙈🙉🙊

- Signed by Moogy