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Approved Whitelisting application: CandyZe_Royal [Approved - Dinomono]
Started by CandyZe_Royal

OOC

Minecraft Username: CandyZe_Royal

Are you at least 18 years old?: Yes i am 21 years old

Have you read the rules? (Link): yes!

(Optional) How did you hear about Avalore?: a friend of mine suggested it!

(Max. 1) Were you referred by someone? If so, please provide their in-game username: SailorBTY

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins):

Hello! my name is candy and i found this server with my friend as we were looking for a new community as opposed to the one we were in previously. I am also a skinner! i have created and sold skins in the past and have created my own characters skins as well! i will list some examples down below. while i am new to this server i have some experience in roleplay but it will take a while for me to get used to this server's mechanics so, please bear with me!

some examples of my work:

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In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)(250 word minimum - please make sure to include at least three references to our lore in your response, with two coming from different pages in the Compendium.  Two of the three selected should also be in-depth, avoid simply name-dropping lore terms. Tie the terms into your character's backstory. Why are they important to them?)

 

Eir Maor let out a sigh, it's difficult to ascertain if it were one of sadness or of annoyance but she looked towards the elderly woman. Clasping her hands together she only had a few thoughts come to mind about this whole journey and none of them were all that good in terms of its reasoning. Something in her eyes was a mix of betrayal and sadness as they recount their whole purpose for traveling to these distant lands.

 

 "Ah well no, I'm not nervous... I'm just disappointed is all especially once I've heard about the aedalls being wiped out... that's what I assume anyhow." 

kicking a few strands of hay off the cart and watching it flutter away in the winds created by the wagon being pulled along the dusty road they turned to check out the other passengers whom all seem to be in their own little worlds, chatting along as if they had no problems, no worries and clearly no troubles to follow them.

 

 “My plan was to travel to ‘the reach’ as you call it and start over.. Away from the things ive seen but now that my plans are ‘kaput’ as some humans would say. I was more so drawn to the aedall and its supposed culture because I heard they believed in something called the phoenix and the equinox? It sounded similar to an old religion I had followed so I was curious but.. To hear there's little information on it beside its relation to the sun and moon it's a bit disparaging to say the least..”

 

 they then turned to their satchel, containing what seems to be a bit of stale bread and a few pieces of dried up jerky before retrieving a piece of the jerky and slowly chewing on it, probably not the best for a meal but it would keep them distracted from the hunger that pangs them for now. 

 

“In truth since the aedalls disappearance ive decided to head to this fabled ‘spire’ for research, i wish to know why they just up and left or why they were wiped out, surely there must be some clues.. right?”

After they finished chewing on quite tasteless jerky they soon noticed a few raised brows, as if she spoke about something that was odd to them but surely that's not possible, she's aware that these lands are new so maybe the information is missing some important details but that cannot be the case, can it?

"well... despite what's around and what is not, after i find out what's truly happened i will most likely head for the lands of ko'ram, thats were the arsa sidhhe mostly reside i believe.. i heard something about 'the great clans of ko'ram' they may have a place for me to reside while i continue my search for the information I'm after but who's to know?

Character Name: Eir Maor

Character Race: Arsa Sidhe

Character Age:30

Brief Physical Description: Eir maor is what one would consider a 'high elf' in simple words though her mannerism is that of humans. in her lifetime it seems she's faced many trials as on one side of her face there is three long claw like scratches that has caused the eye on that side to become blind. whilst they used to both be a deep blue, now one is a milky hue due to the blindness. they have golden blonde hair which is usually tied into a high half up hairstyle. they're a staggering 6'1 in height whilst for their build its lean with a few muscles as they train regularly. they're mostly interested in hand-to-hand combat rather than anything else, so she thinks it's important to keep up her physical strength despite its difficulty of being what these lands call the arsa sidhe. their skin being slightly more tan than one would assume it seems their old home was that of deserts maybe? who's to know for sure.

[im aware elves here normally have purple eyes rather than blue but please have mercy on eir shes very special to me <3]

Hello! I'm Dinomono and I'll be reviewing this application, so far you're on the right track, but a few things keep me from approving it just yet.

As you know, the application requirement is for at least 2 of our lore references to be in-depth. While I do think Eir's mention of the Aedall fits it, there'd still need to be another aspect of the lore elaborated on enough in the app for me to approve it. Also! (and your character might have not been aware of the exact timeline ICly, in which case it'd make sense, but I feel it's worth pointing out just in case you'd think Eir would know this info) The Aedall's disappearance happened in 1590 After Collapse, 51 years before the present time in Avalore, they would've been long gone by two decades before Eir was even born, and when I read your app it does seem to be mentioned as something recently uncovered by her. As stated though, they were indeed a secretive peoples, and maybe the character simply had no idea of it until recently, just a little detail.

Once changes are made in terms of adding another in-depth reference, please respond to this thread so that I'm notified and can continue reviewing it!

🙈🙉🙊

- Signed by Moogy

Dinomono:

Hello! I'm Dinomono and I'll be reviewing this application, so far you're on the right track, but a few things keep me from approving it just yet.

As you know, the application requirement is for at least 2 of our lore references to be in-depth. While I do think Eir's mention of the Aedall fits it, there'd still need to be another aspect of the lore elaborated on enough in the app for me to approve it. Also! (and your character might have not been aware of the exact timeline ICly, in which case it'd make sense, but I feel it's worth pointing out just in case you'd think Eir would know this info) The Aedall's disappearance happened in 1590 After Collapse, 51 years before the present time in Avalore, they would've been long gone by two decades before Eir was even born, and when I read your app it does seem to be mentioned as something recently uncovered by her. As stated though, they were indeed a secretive peoples, and maybe the character simply had no idea of it until recently, just a little detail.

Once changes are made in terms of adding another in-depth reference, please respond to this thread so that I'm notified and can continue reviewing it!

that's the goal! because they were so secretive she didn't get a lot of information so my idea was to have her find out its old information more into her travels , but i can absolutely add a more Indepth reference!  apologize i should have made the characters intentions clearer in my application! i do hope the changes made [additions more like lol] are adequate to what your looking for ^^

- Welcome! -

Your whitelist application is approved. The server runs on 1.20.4 and you can connect using the IP: mc.avalore.net.

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Consider creating a profile for your character in the Character Profiles section of the forums!

If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me or another member of our Community team either on the forums or through our Discord.

🙈🙉🙊

- Signed by Moogy