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Denied xo31's application [Denied - Bliinx]
Started by xo31

Minecraft Username: xo31

Are you at least 18 years old?: yeah

Have you read the rules? (Link): yerp

(Optional) How did you hear about Avalore?: a friend

(Max. 1) Were you referred by someone? If so, please provide their in-game username: _AzureLexi

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins):

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)(250 word minimum - please make sure to include at least three references to our lore in your response, with two coming from different pages in the Compendium.  Two of the three selected should also be in-depth, avoid simply name-dropping lore terms. Tie the terms into your character's backstory. Why are they important to them?)"To spread the word of Catharsis." the man briefly explained, his veil and his hood falling just short of his mouth, so it was the only thing revealed. "I’ve heard about the Spire through words of travellers on the road, and it’s been made strikingly clear to me that the inhabitants of this world find themselves bound to patrons, and serve them, rather than themselves and their own lives.” His golden, fey-touched eyes peered beyond that hood, and a hand withdrew from a glove, plastered over in draconic scales. “This is what patrons and higher beings do to us mortals.” - “And yet, we find ourselves praising them, and working in their favor. I simply wish to spread the word that we should be freed from enslavement to these beings. The Fey. The Patrons. None of these beings should have this much power.” He leaned forth, a visible breath leaving his teeth. Beneath that hood of his, glowing scars upon his face were visible- but only when one was up close. “I tried to find my way with the Fireborne, but they wished but to praise those whom cursed us.” - “Now, I seek to enlighten people of this realm to CATHARSIS. And usher in a new time of freedom for the common, mortal-man.” He stood, then, and turned to depart - evidently, the hooded man was on a mission in these lands - and he thought naught that he’d make any milestones on that mission if he sat around and spoke all day.

Character Name: Samsara

Character Race: Fey-Touched

Character Age: 25

Brief Physical Description: A hooded man, with glowing scars of religious imagery upon his face. He has white skin, though uneven portions of it on his arms and legs find themselves host to golden, draconic scales. He stands at a grand total of 6'0, with golden, glowing eyes, and long, golden hair.

Hello there! I'm Blinx, and I'll be the one reviewing your whitelist application. You have a solid concept, but I have some feedback.

Firstly, I believe you have some of the lore mixed up. Within Avalore, there are different forces and individuals who hold great power, like Samsara speaks of--namely the Fey, Fables, and Patrons. While they're all powerful, they differ significantly. Fables are a collection of supernatural entities, items, and forces whose stories hold great power (this does not make them gods). One of these is known as the Spirit of the Fire Dragon, which is what the Fireborne culture worships. Samsara references them praising 'those who cursed us', but Fey are separate from the Spirit and fall under their own category entirely, rather than being Fables. Fey-Touched occur when a Fey affects a child during their parent's pregnancy or when existing Fey-Touched have kids of their own and pass it down. The Fire Dragon, as a Fable, has much less free reign to intervene in the lives of mortals than the Fey do. Here are the pages for the Fire Dragon and the overview for Fables, if you'd like more clarification!

Additionally, within the roleplay reply under the In-Character section, three references to different lore terms with their own Compendium pages are required, two of which must be in-depth. While the mention of the Patrons is tied very neatly into Samsara's motivation and story, I need more detail on at least one other term before I can approve the application. This can be any of the other terms mentioned so far (Fey, the Fireborne, the Fey-Touched) or something else entirely, if you like!

Next, Fey-Touched eyes do not glow, and there's currently no means for fresh characters to begin with glowing scars. Samsara's scales are fine, as well, though I will note that they'd be the result of Fey meddling. To gain scales from the Fire Dragon falls under the Fabled Feats system detailed on the pages linked above, and is voluntary. Otherwise, golden eyes, scales, and hair is fine.

Finally, the maximum height for Fey-Touched that are not half-race is 5'10.

Please reply here when you've made the necessary changes, so I'll be notified!

As it's been over two weeks without a response, I'm going to reject your application for inactivity.

You're welcome to re-apply at any time!