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Approved Whitelist Application MeatWest [Approved - Dinomono]
Started by MeatWest

Minecraft Username: MeatWest

Are you at least 18 years old?: Yes

Have you read the rules? (Link): Yes

(Optional) How did you hear about Avalore?: Got invited by a friend

(Max. 1) Were you referred by someone? If so, please provide their in-game username: idk their username tbh

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins): I’m the biggest sigma y’all ever meet.

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)

“Not nervous,” he said, his voice even, eyes studying the old woman as one might study a flame. “I’ve come from the Ashlands. Near the Dragon’s Skull.”

Blood-crusted bandages clung to his hands and forearms, wrapped in haste. He adjusted them with care, fingers trembling slightly from exhaustion or restraint. “I’m not from these lands… but my strength has been tested. Two hellhounds, a day apart.”

He set his gaze upon her again, golden eyes dimmed by soot and distance. Without a word, he lifted his cup and drank until it was empty, the sound of it setting down soft but final.

“I was born among the Fireborne. Both my pater and mater were Greatlings—stone-blooded, iron-willed. Where I come from, strength is not taught. It is revealed.”
His voice dropped, steadier now. “At twelve, we’re cast into the wild. No blade, no food. One year alone. No return permitted before the seasons turn.”

He let the silence settle for a breath.
“That was how men were made.”

His eyes didn’t leave hers. “The Dragon’s Maw isn’t far from where I lived. A dead volcano, they say. But its eyes still burn. You feel it watching. Sometimes... you feel it calling. Some don’t return from their pilgrimages. Some return changed.”

Then he turned his eyes back to her, unreadable. “So no, not nervous. Just... ready.”

Character Name:  Brontes

Character Race: Giantling

Character Age: 27

Brief Physical Description: Standing at eight feet tall, he looms like a statue carved from ancient stone—his skin a rough, gray hue. Twin ram horns curl back from his temples, thick and ridged. His eyes burn gold and have vertical pupils. Long, wavy white hair cascades down his back in untamed strands, like a lion’s mane. His forearms and fists are wrapped in blood-stained cloth.

Hello! I'm Dinomono and I'll be reviewing your application. So far you're on the right track, however a few things are keeping me from approving it just yet, relating to the requirements for whitelist applications listed in the template:

  • Relating to lore references, we require for three references to be made about entries in the compendium (can be anything in there, creatures, cultures, places, etc.) and for two of these to be in-depth, this means elaborating on them further than namedrops. For reference, you've already made two simple references with hellhounds and the ashlands being mentioned within your larger in-depth reference to the fireborne culture made in Brontes' dialogue.
  • The second point is the word count, the minimum we require is 250 words total on the response to the old woman, you've done about 180 words on yours. This one I'm fairly sure will solve itself with the addition of the other needed in-depth reference however.

Once you've made edits to fit the whitelist requirements, please respond to this thread so I'm notified and can take a look at it again!

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- Signed by Moogy

- Welcome! -

Your whitelist application is approved. The server runs on 1.20.4 and you can connect using the IP: mc.avalore.net.

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If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me or another member of our Community team either on the forums or through our Discord.

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- Signed by Moogy