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Approved Talvor of Clan Highmarch [Approved - Dinomono]
Started by TalvorFaeburrow

OOC

Minecraft Username: PlaidWeasel

Are you at least 18 years old?: Yes

Have you read the rules? (Link): Yes

(Optional) How did you hear about Avalore?: I looked for Minecraft roleplaying servers and found this one.

(Max. 1) Were you referred by someone? If so, please provide their in-game username: N/A

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins): I'm Plaid/GrandMagus (on Discord), I'm a Dad of 3, I've been doing roleplaying/TTRPGs for 16-17 years now, and I'm a huge fantasy nerd!

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)

Talvor turned his head slowly toward the woman, his broad shoulders shifting with the creak of the wagon as he adjusted his weight. Her eyes were kind and steady, though he could feel how small she was next to him; a bird peering up at a mountain. He let the silence hang a moment, his amber-green gaze lingering on her face, before he drew in a long breath.

“The mountains do not give,” he said at last, his voice carrying low, shaped with that heavy cadence of the Giantlings, like striking two stones against one another. His eyes drifted past her to the horizon, the endless green rolling out behind them, further and further away. “They take. Year after year, they take. I was raised where the soil is thin, where goats grow lean, where a man’s belly is filled with what he can hunt… or what he can take from another. My father taught me the spear. My mother taught me the ways of leadership. But neither could teach me how to make the earth itself feed me. Not in the high stone, not in that life.” 

He shifted again, tusks catching the sun as his jaw tightened. “I have killed, more times than I care to count. And though my blood is dark, I would rather it run warm through me than stain another man’s hands.” His tone softened, almost in jest. “I am tired of blood. I want bread.”

Talvor reached into his knapsack and pulled out a full loaf of bread, breaking it between his hands and passing it between the wagon-goers. Finally, he passed the largest piece to her, a faint smile tugging at the edge of his mouth. “So I come to the Reach. To coax life from the soil. To grow instead of burn. To put down roots where the land will let me. If the people here will let me.”

He leaned back against the rattling wagon wall, letting the sway rock him to sleep as though the matter were now settled. Yet the old woman would notice the faintest flicker in his eyes as he slept, betraying what he would not say aloud: that he feared this dream was more fragile than he dared to admit.

Character Name: Talvor of Clan Highmarch

Character Race: Greatling

Character Age (Appearance): 35

 Brief Physical Description: 7'9", 400 lbs; thick, coal-black hair; stone-gray skin with faint freckles around his nose and shoulders. Amber-green eyes with modest back-sweeping horns; smaller mouth tusks. Prefers to wear practical fabrics like wool, leather, or furs, over a weathered farmer's cloak of his own design.

Image of Skin and Figura Model:

Hello! I'm Dinomono and I'll be reviewing this application, so far you're on the right track, but two things keep me from approving you just yet:

  • First is the dialogue with the old woman, where I'd need a second in-depth reference to the Compendium (I take the backstory about Talvor's treatment as a 'cursed' child as in-depth reference for Fey-Touched.) This can be either expanding on a reference already made as a mention in this app (Valkia, Mist Isles, The Wall) or something new entirely, as long as it's in the compendium it counts.
  • Second, and most importantly, Talvor's appearance. While a Fey-Touched of woodland lineage can have plant-like growths along their arms and legs and sparsely around the rest of the body these do not reach a point to make them fully distinct from other humanoids, like the Jack-o-lantern head he's shown to have, or the pumpkin-skin. They have hair and skin much like a human's, only with the addition of these unique fey features, alterations should be made for both his description and ingame skin for your character to fit the setting.

Once edits have been made, please respond to this thread so I'm notified and can continue reviewing your application!

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- Signed by Moogy

Remade the character entirely as a Greatling rather than a Fey-Touched.

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- Signed by Moogy