OOC

Minecraft Username: Kasuto29

Are you at least 18 years old?: Yes

Have you read the rules? (Link): Yes

(Optional) How did you hear about Avalore?: No one, I was looking for an RP server

(Max. 1) Were you referred by someone? If so, please provide their in-game username:

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins):Im Eraser.

I never RP with an community, just sometimes with some friends, I really like fantasy like world, I like DnD universe and I love roleplay video and community.

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In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)? (250 word minimum - please make sure to include at least three references to our lore in your response, with two coming from different pages in the Compendium.  Two of the three selected should also be in-depth, avoid simply name-dropping lore terms. Tie the terms into your character's backstory. Why are they important to them?)

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I came here,” I say after a pause, “because there’s nothing i want to do, I am chasing something I don't even know myself... .

'' After a moment of silent. I sits up un my seat''

Im from The pearl Coast, Port Aylma'aan to be more exact, I stay there for sometime already trying to understand the culture but there was so much difference, they all so bright, so joyfull, there song floating in the streets, the sun reflecting on the sea making it seem brighter then himself, the many boats entering and leaving the port every days, the streets full of life with the many travelers and the customs where they paint their body... but look at me '' Show my arms full of crystalised skin '' I  can't even paint on that anything ... .

So im trying to get a new begining, I heard from many travelers entering to The Pearl Coast that the Reach is a land of new beginnings for most. '' Show an brighter face '' So im planning to start again too.

Beyond the wall there are ruins from the Aedall, still untouched, I may find a way to be usefull in some ways after all.
The Spire is full of schollar they surelly gonna need me for something and even if not i may find something there that will give me a reason to live.

'' I glance down at the small seashell tied to my belt and smile faintly''. Still, I didn’t leave everything behind. ( From The Pearl Coast )

( I try my best)

Character Name: Lucian Arannis 

Character Race: Void-Touched

Character Age: 22

Brief Physical Description: Male : An void-Touched more human like but with most of his arms coverd with crystalised skin, one eyes crystalised too so blind from one eye.

Have peppered hair color, dark purlple eye, dark skin and an average height and weight (1,81cm) and (78 kg) He have his tail around one of his leg

Image of Skin and Figura Model:   I don't know how to put an image of my skin there

Hello! I'm Dinomono and I'll be reviewing this application, so far you're on the right track, however I'm gonna need a few changes made before I can approve you.

• First of all, and I apologise as it likely wasn't clear, your whitelist's character can't be a Void-Touched. This is because the prompt given by the old woman is one that requires the player character to give answers on backstory and details of the world, things Void-Touched would not be aware of as they appear into our realm (The Southern Reach, specifically) without memories and are an extremely recent population. This doesn't mean you can't play as one in-server, but that your whitelist's character specifically should form part of one of the other races, even if you will heavily alter them/use another character completely in actual RP.
• As for Lucian's skin, either it or the IC description will need to be altered, you describe him as having "peppered hair colour" yet the skin file you sent is bald. I'd also ask, if not covered by anything, that the ears be textured as well.
• Lastly, a general grammar check on the text.

These are really the only issues I can see, I think you've made a good amount of reference to the culture of the Pearl Coast and only really need these edits made + More in-depth references to the rest of our lore for it to be acceptable. Once you've made changes, please reply to this thread so that I'm notified and we can continue!

OOC

Minecraft Username: Kasuto29

Are you at least 18 years old?: Yes

Have you read the rules? (Link): Yes

(Optional) How did you hear about Avalore?: No one, I was looking for an RP server

(Max. 1) Were you referred by someone? If so, please provide their in-game username:

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins):Im Eraser.

I never RP with an community, just sometimes with some friends, I really like fantasy like world, I like DnD universe and I love roleplay video and community.

—

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)? (250 word minimum - please make sure to include at least three references to our lore in your response, with two coming from different pages in the Compendium.  Two of the three selected should also be in-depth, avoid simply name-dropping lore terms. Tie the terms into your character's backstory. Why are they important to them?)

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The woman’s question draws a silent to me for a moment — . “Forty winters I’ve seen,” I tell her, “and each one colder than the last without purpose.”

I was born in the Amafells under the Sign of the Mountain’s Eye, to the Harthbain line — stonemasons and oath-keepers of the Stonerunner tribes. My mother, Matriarch Eirra, still rules our hearth-clan. It was she who sent me south, bearing tribute for the High Matriarch: a black basalt shard cut from the ridge above Notthof. Tradition says such stone carries the breath of the stars within it, and to deliver it in person is both duty and absolution.

Our family keeps an old tale — one passed through the fires during Frostfade. My grandfather once traded with the Fireborne, those ash-hearted kin of ours who still whisper to the spirit of the Fire Dragon. He said their flames never die, not even when buried in snow. When I was a boy, I dreamed that same fire was in my blood — a dragon’s ember hidden beneath the mountain’s flesh. Perhaps that’s why my heart has never cooled.

Among the Stonerunners, we say “All paths lead to Notthof,” yet I think some twist toward destiny instead. The Diviners read my stars before I left — a comet’s tail, burning fast and low. They told me it meant change.

So here I am, Matriarch’s son, tribute-bearer, and fool — chasing the same fire my ancestors once feared.

( Tharn Harthbain ), a forty-year-old Stonerunner Greatling, stands a towering eight feet tall with stone-grey skin touched by moss-green veins.
  His broad frame and calm bearing echo the patience of the mountains he calls home.
  A broken horn crowns his temple, a remnant of past contests beneath the stars.
  Dark hair, streaked with silver, is bound in tight braids to keep from the mountain wind.
  Across his shoulders hangs a hide cloak stitched with constellations — the mark of his clan.
  At his neck rests a black basalt pendant, carved from the same rock as his tribute to the High Matriarch.
  His voice, deep and deliberate, carries the rhythm of the Soft Tongue, commanding yet respectful.
  In his steady eyes burns a quiet ember — a spark of Fireborne legend, and the longing to see beyond his peaks. )

Character Name: Lucian Arannis 

Character Race: Void-Touched

Character Age: 22

Brief Physical Description: Male :
A Void-Touched wanderer born from the Ether’s cold silence, stands between worlds.Dark crystalline skin climbs across his arms and face, one eye sealed beneath a jagged amethyst bloom.His remaining eye gleams faint violet, filled with quiet awareness and calm restraint.A weathered hood hides most of his Void-touched features, though the crystal hums softly beneath the cloth.
Each motion is careful, as though every gesture must be remembered to stay human.
His voice carries a low resonance, like wind through hollow stone — steady, but never warm.
He moves with the patience of one long removed from chaos, yet never fully at peace.
There is wisdom in his silence — and something unknowable behind his single gaze.

Image of Skin and Figura Model: 

Unfortunately, I'm going to have to deny this application as I've detected AI being used for the IC response and descriptions, feel free to reapply again in the future.

AI-generated text (even if a minor change for better grammar) always results in denied whitelists, I don't need perfect english or punctuation, just as good as it can be by using your own writing. There's little for me to review about it otherwise.