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Approved LIghtMoon_00 Whitelisting Application. [Approved - Dinomono]
Started by LightMoon_00

OOC

Minecraft Username: LightMoon_00

Are you at least 18 years old?: yes

Have you read the rules? (Link): yes

(Optional) How did you hear about Avalore?: i heard about it by someone

(Max. 1) Were you referred by someone? If so, please provide their in-game username: undertaleftw1

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins): 

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)(250 word minimum - please make sure to include at least three references to our lore in your response, with two coming from different pages in the Compendium.  Two of the three selected should also be in-depth, avoid simply name-dropping lore terms. Tie the terms into your character's backstory. Why are they important to them?)

*The girl's cold eyes fell upon the lady. She pulled her hood down further, covering her face even more, her posture firm.*
"I used to live with my family. We were a small clan, of no more than fifteen, living in the Ashlands."
*Remembering her past, the girl sighed, continuing.*
"One day, a weird disease took almost everyone in the clan. Some heard about the Spirit of the Red Dragon, and in their despair and sickness, tried to build a small temple. They gave offerings to the Spirit, pleading for health and strength in return. But despite their efforts, the sickness remained. Hurt, dying, and with nothing to be done, some of my people decided to go through the Dragon's Tongue Pass, on the Eastern border, to end their suffering. Those who decided to just let death take them, too weak for the journey, isolated themselves instead. They didn't want me to get sick too, keeping their distance."
*She paused for a moment. She'd been taught to never leave her family, yet here she was. Forced, for whatever that was worth anymore. It wasn't an easy topic.*
"They forced me to go, to find a new place to live. I had to obey. At first, I considered the Duchy of Rulan, but when I heard about the Reach, I figured it'd be better."
*She gave a weak smile, barely there, but filled with hope and set with determination.*
"For those who passed, I refuse to dishonor them. I'll be the warrior I was trained to be, protecting those in need, and maybe I'll find a place I can call home again. A rich land, where I can start from scratch, without being plagued by so many bad memories, without the moans and cries of agony..."
*She covers her face again, overcome by emotion. She didn't want to be recognized, but then, there's nobody left who even would. Everything's gone. Everyone.*
"I'll be better. And nobody will feel like this again."

Character Name: Sybis Corati

Character Race: Fey-Touched

Character Age: 18

 Brief Physical Description: A 5'3 women, with eyes yellow like the sun, always using her blue hood.

Image of Skin and Figura Model:

Hello! I am very sorry for the wait on this app, I've taken it over to review as the Mentor Team member who claimed it before had to go on a break 🙏
Your application with Sybis and her story response to the old woman is on the right track so far, the one thing it would require for me to approve it would be a second in-depth reference and a mention of another lore topic.

An in-depth reference is any sort of reference to entries in the Compendium that goes beyond a name-drop or quick comment, if about a place it could speak of it's environment, locations or society (as you've done already with the Ashlands, mentioning clans and the Dragon's Tongue) - but the reference can be anything within the compendium, cultures, fables or beasts anything works as long as it's elaborated on.
As the requirements are at least two in-depth references and one simple, you can also make a quick mention or name-drop on another Compendium entry to make the whitelist able to be fully approved.

Again, I apologise for the wait, and once you've made edits please reply to this thread so I can be notified and continue reviewing!

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- Signed by Moogy

just edited it, sorry for the delay on the answer

- Welcome! -

Your whitelist application is approved. The server runs on 1.20.4 and you can connect using the IP: mc.avalore.net.

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- Signed by Moogy