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Approved Fishsea-application [Approved - MerryLights]
Started by fishsea

OOC

 

 

Minecraft Username: Fishsea

 

 

Are you at least 18 years old?: I am 21

 

 

Have you read the rules? (Link): yes

 

 

(Optional) How did you hear about Avalore?: reddit 

 

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins):

 

 

 

IC

 

 

 

(The answer)

 

 

 

Robin closes his eyes and starts remembering his fallen Noble house Rosetaker, in the eastern Continent. He still remembers fragments of the luxurious life he once lived, The warm halls, The polished marble, he opens his eyes again and answer the lady "It's my first time you're right. I am here for money to take what is mine and rebuild my house name."

 

 

"Rebuild your house ?" she ask the strange boy "Tell my child, where did come from"

 

 

He started searching through hisbag before answering her "I am form the midlands specifically in Mariza. city, we were are a former noble house, living in the edge of the city and all was good, we had everything thing understand control until my father became the head of the house." he sigh "You look like a smart lady so you probably already know I am most likely a valkian"

 

 

The lady take a moment thinking, then ask another question "What are you doing here, are you a merchant ?"

 

 

He pull out a bottle wine he offers the lady a drink before he stard drinking form it. he doesn't care if the drink spill on his old Noble clothes what left for his family clothes with his lucky coin "Sadly no. but my great grandfather was a great merchant he made a lot of money like any good Valkian. people even stard saying that he had the lady of lake favor. then my father ruin it."He sigh and continue "I Hope they have a good job's here, after I don't to cross the wall back "

 

The old lady refuse the drink and ask Robin "I see... what jobs have you had then?"

 

 

He take a sip form the bottle. "I was a Hunter but that job didn't pay well, probably because I was a bad hunter" he chuckles to himself, remembering how bad in hunting he is "But still I am hoping to find a good job"

 

 

She try to be supportive "You're strong young man, I am sure you will find a great job." she to change the topic "Do you want to rebuild your house to make your parents proud?"

 

 

He chuckles to himself "No, my parents are dead idiots who ruined my birthright, I want to rebuild my house because I am noble I was born a noble, so this my right, so I am trying to be a Noble again and reclaiming back my birthright."

 

She can see the idiot boy is attached to his past, so she try to change the subject. "did you travel around ?"

 

 

He take deep breath trying to thinks about the places that he travel "My father and I traveled to the Duchy of Sanguifleur, and we visit the Comté d’Éclatier lovely place they have nice food and we spend a lot of money there. and we visit the wall, but this my first crossing it. I was shocked by how great it's looks. And we visit Stonebrook in Faded Steppe a sad place, I really hate it there the Rocks were anonnying, and view was nothing but deadland, but at less they have a great drinks."

 

 

He take another sip of drink before saying. "How rude I didn't tell you my name. I am Robin Rosetaker nice to meet you, my lady." He will give a little nod with his head to the old lady, as he will continue drinking and make a little talk with the old lady, before they part away he say to her "May the sun shine on you whereever you go, my lady."

 

 

 

 

 

Character Name: Robin Rosetaker 

 

Character Race: human 

 

Character Age: 24

 

 Brief Physical Description:

Hight: 5'8

Weigh: average 

Hair color: blonde/golden

Eyes color: Green 

Skin Color: pale 

 

Image of Skin and Figura Model: 

Hello! My name is Merry and I will be handling your whitelist application. While you've got a good start, you still need to tie Robin into the world of Avalore. As it says on the whitelisting application:

"Please make sure to include at least three references to our lore in your response, with two coming from different pages in the Compendium.  Two of the three selected should also be in-depth, avoid simply name-dropping lore terms. Tie the terms into your character's backstory. Why are they important to them?"


Please reply to this once edits have been made, and feel free to ask in #whitelisting-help if you have any questions!

Done I hope I done everything right 🙏

Thank you for clarifying the lore, if possible, could you please review and correct some of the grammar mistakes in the IC section of your application?

MerryLights:

Thank you for clarifying the lore, if possible, could you please review and correct some of the grammar mistakes in the IC section of your application?

Done. if there's any mistakes or something unclarified please tell where, so I can fix it.

Welcome!

Your whitelist application has been accepted! The server is currently running on Minecraft version 1.20.4, and can be joined by connecting with the IP: mc.avalore.net.

Basic plugin, mod, and Figura information can be found under the Guides section of the Forum. There's also an excellent write-up by community member Pyrias which is designed to help newcomers get started and connected, readable here.

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