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Approved Tenithen's Whitelist Application [Approved - Bliinx]
Started by tenithen

OOC

Minecraft Username: Tenithen

Are you at least 18 years old?: Yes

Have you read the rules? (Link): Yes

(Optional) How did you hear about Avalore?: My buddy Starfle c:

(Max. 1) Were you referred by someone? If so, please provide their in-game username: Starflethegreat

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins): Well, first things first! My name is Tenithen, but just call me Ten or May, I'm a Medical Coding student who dabbles in digital art as well as a variety of TTRPGs. Creative Writing and collaborative storytelling are one of my greatest passions.

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)

Marilya jolted upon being acknowledged, the young woman making an undignified yelp as she found herself snapped out of her haze. Her cheeks flushed with mild embarrassment, a bashful grin curling the edges of her lips as she nervously took off her ushanka, fiddling with the hat, between her gloved hands. She was distinctly Northern Falstoner in garb, but the girl was surely a peculiar sort, seeing as she was dressed as if in preparation for a mild blizzard just from the sheer thickness of her coat and the evidently fleece-lined tights wrapping her legs. The poor thing had been wringing her hands the entire ride as well, as if trying to grasp any remnants of warmth despite the temperate weather and clear blue expanse above them. She briefly pushed back her hair behind her ear, before quickly becoming self-conscious, for the tips of her ears were fluffy and feathered while more plumage seemed to threaten to peak beyond her furred collar, the downy decorating the back of her neck and beyond...she must be Fey-touched, aside from her eyes appearing like literal emerald cabochons embedded within her sockets.

"Oh!! Hi!! I--uh--is it that obvious? Oh gosh...I guess it is kinda obvious, I was trying reaaallyyy hard to be composed and mysterious but--" Marilya abruptly paused at the inquiry, her mind finally having a chance to halt and collect itself, inhaling deeply to further calm her nerves. 

"I...am here for help. Maybe? I don't know, I just know maybe I'll find interesting people, connections are everything and well--what's the best place to find all sorts of folks aside from The Spire?" She beamed her eyes dancing with enthusiasm. "My uh---family also enjoys business opportunities, Velveteen Voyagers and all...and I like independence so--I made the big leap to travel all by myself! I'm determined to make sure I don't regret a thing! My family's pretty far and I think currently having fun preparing for The Grand Bazaar at The Crossroads without me so--I can't panic now!"



Usage of AI to generate, modify or translate the writing on your application will result in denial of your whitelist. There will be no chance to re-apply afterwards.

Character Name: Marilya Morozova

Character Race: Arsa-Sidhe Fey-Touched

Character Age: 22

 Brief Physical Description: Fairy skin, Short stature, Vivid green-blue round eyes, Silver ash blonde hair, her body is covered in feathers but she hides it religiously, and usually adorns a fur-lined coat and white ushanka hat.

Image of Skin and Figura Model: (Included commissioned art of her made by L1N6L1N6 on toyhou.se)

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Hello! My name is Blinx, and I'll be handling your whitelist app.

As the lore in the reply section is compliant, my only comment is on Marilya's appearance! Fey-Touched can very rarely have blonde hair, and the skin and art alike depict grey-white. If you'd like to keep it, you could make Marilya an Arsa Sidhe (elf)/Fey-Touched as half-races on Avalore are allowed to inherit traits from both of their parents! The only mandatory traits for doing so are detailed on the Half Races page on the compendium (a slim frame and solid-colour eyes), while Arsa can have hair in shades as pale as white. 

If you'd rather Marilya remain only Fey-Touched, I'll have to ask her hair colour be changed. Let me know what you'd like or edit the application to match, and drop a reply to let me know once you've decided so I'll be notified!

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Bliinx:

Hello! My name is Blinx, and I'll be handling your whitelist app.

As the lore in the reply section is compliant, my only comment is on Marilya's appearance! Fey-Touched can very rarely have blonde hair, and the skin and art alike depict grey-white. If you'd like to keep it, you could make Marilya an Arsa Sidhe (elf)/Fey-Touched as half-races on Avalore are allowed to inherit traits from both of their parents! The only mandatory traits for doing so are detailed on the Half Races page on the compendium (a slim frame and solid-colour eyes), while Arsa can have hair in shades as pale as white. 

If you'd rather Marilya remain only Fey-Touched, I'll have to ask her hair colour be changed. Let me know what you'd like or edit the application to match, and drop a reply to let me know once you've decided so I'll be notified!

Hi there!! Thank you so much for informing me! I'm willing yo make Marilya an Arsa-Sidhe Fey-Touched! I shall edit accordingly!

Then with that, the application is compliant. As Marilya names Fallstone+Steppe locations, I recommend checking out the Town Crier channel in the Discord, when you get the chance -- it has lore information about Fallstone not on the Compendium, as the next server campaign unfolds!

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~ [ Welcome! ] ~

Your whitelist application has been accepted! The server is currently running on Minecraft version 1.20.4, and can be joined by connecting with the IP: mc.avalore.net.

Basic plugin, mod, and Figura information can be found under the Guides section of the Forum. There's also an excellent write-up by community member Pyrias which is designed to help newcomers get started and connected, readable here.

I'd also recommend taking a look at Character Profiles. There you can find information on other players' characters as well as make a profile for your own, or read the in-character journals and other writings related to them. Remember to join the Discord here, as well.

Should you ever have any questions you can ask on the Discord in the appropriate channels, make a Ticket, or reach out to a member of the Community team!