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Denied Whitelist Application: Mune [Denied - Lumu]
Started by InkWolfOnline

OOC

Minecraft Username: InkWolfOnline

Are you at least 18 years old?: Yes

Have you read the rules? (Link): Yes

(Optional) How did you hear about Avalore?: Another player

(Max. 1) Were you referred by someone? If so, please provide their in-game username: FrostedEdelweiss

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins): My name is Ink and I'm someone who enjoys watching drama unfold. I've been doing minecraft rp for a few years now. I am also an artists, but... I am still learning how to draw men. Its surprisingly hard

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The sound of clinking glasses and idle chatter welcome you in as you find yourself stepping into The Full Cask. An older man with a full mustache and warm smile beckons you over to the bar he's tending. His gazes washes over you, a glint of some knowing look shining in his eyes. As you sit, his voice rumbles out:

"Hello there stranger! What can I get for you?" 

After you order, he continues to make small talk. "You must be a newcomer. I'm Maarten, glad to meet you." He says with a certain kindness in his tone. 

"Tell me, what brings you to the Spire?"

 

How do you respond (in character)(250 word minimum - please make sure to include at least three references to our lore in your response, with two coming from different pages in the Compendium.  Two of the three selected should also be in-depth, avoid simply name-dropping lore terms. Tie the terms into your character's backstory. Why are they important to them?)

Usage of AI to generate, modify or translate the writing on your application will result in denial of your whitelist. There will be no chance to re-apply afterwards.

Your Response:

Mune kept her head down, eyes glancing between the man and the table as he spoke. She hesitated, but spoke despite not wanting to. It was rude to ignore someone. "Oh... well...I can't really say. I just happen to be passing by." She fidgeted in her seat, fingers picking at the counter's edge. "Is that what the thing in the sky is? I've never seen anything like it. This place is much different from the midlands."

She then looked up, eyes wide. "I'm sorry- I forgot to introduce myself. You may call me Mune. But... anything you prefer works." She mumbled out the last bit, giving him a nod. "I hope I am not interrupting your nice afternoon. Some folks that called themselves Falstoners told me this was a good place to rest when arriving to this town. I have heard of their nature, so I had good faith this place would be nice." 

"Hm...you seem very different from those of Valkian nature back in the midlands. I'm not really hoping for much, or anything at all, but I just don't think... their ways suited me. I'm not privy to getting into it with a stranger." She sighed, shaking her head. "I don't wish to burden such a kind looking man." 

Mune pulled open her satchel, reaching in and pulling out some herbs. They seemed fresh, like they had been picked not long before arriving here, and neatly wrapped into a bundle. “How much does a plate of food trade for?” She looked between the bartender and gentleman sitting beside her, confused by their stares. “Is something the matter? Are the herbs not of good enough quality?”

Character Name: Mune Valley

Character Race: Fey/Arsa Sidhe

Character Age: 21

 Brief Physical Description:

A young woman with a slim, athletic build. Her height being 5'5. Her skin is pale, with a light tan across the top portions of her skin. Her hair is a light pink and tied up into a large bubble braid, reaching down to her calves. Her ears are long, with antlers attached above them, reaching out much more like thin branches than actual antlers. Her eyes are a light silvery blue, with freckle like dots underlining each eye. The ends of her fingers have a sooty color, almost brown like fertile soil when looked at in the right light. 

Image of Skin and Figura Model:

Hello! I'm Lumu, and I'll be helping with this whitelist! 🐈

There's a few things I'd like to address, so please do bear with me here:
- Did you mean to write Fey-Touched? Fey (by themselves) are not a playable race, so we tend to want clarity regarding the difference between the Fey as entities and Fey-Touched as a race!
- If you are intending to play a Fey-Touched, then their eyes must be a solid color
- Your character cannot have horns unless they are a Greatling. Antlers are unfortunately not an option regarding Greatling horns either
- It would be nice to specify that the hair is dyed, just for clarity. The color itself is fine; assuming the hair at base is white
- You're on the right track with the lore! But I can really only confidently point out two references, when we require at least three overall.
- Your lore is also rather vague, I'd like to see it tie into the character more over simply mentioning them! Things such as why and how these things matter to your character. Perhaps more narrative background on her life before the time of the prompt? Where is she from? What about the Valkians exactly does she not agree with, and why? These are, of course, merely a few suggestions that I can think of! If you have your own ideas, feel free to expand on those!

Once you have made the requested edits, feel free to leave a reply and I will get back to you as soon as I'm able! And if you have any questions at all, feel free to ask in the discord! 🐾

 

Sodalite
The Fey's Maestro

Hello! I'm just here to say that if there is no reply in the next two days, the application will be denied for inactivity! 🐈🐾

Sodalite
The Fey's Maestro

Seeing as there's no replies, I'll be having to deny this application for inactivity. You are free to re-apply whenever, however! Just keep in mind the requested edits if doing so! 🐈🐾

Sodalite
The Fey's Maestro