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Approved Application - PestyWarlock [Approved - Moony]
Started by PestyWarlock

OOC

Minecraft Username: PestyWarlock

Are you at least 18 years old?: Yes

Have you read the rules? (Link): Yes

(Optional) How did you hear about Avalore?: ShinyB

(Max. 1) Were you referred by someone? If so, please provide their in-game username: ShinyB?

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins): I make music, I think. 

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The sound of clinking glasses and idle chatter welcome you in as you find yourself stepping into The Full Cask. An older man with a full mustache and warm smile beckons you over to the bar he's tending. His gazes washes over you, a glint of some knowing look shining in his eyes. As you sit, his voice rumbles out:

"Hello there stranger! What can I get for you?" 

After you order, he continues to make small talk. "You must be a newcomer. I'm Maarten, glad to meet you." He says with a certain kindness in his tone. 

"Tell me, what brings you to the Spire?"

 

How do you respond (in character)(250 word minimum - please make sure to include at least three references to our lore in your response, with two coming from different pages in the Compendium.  Two of the three selected should also be in-depth, avoid simply name-dropping lore terms. Tie the terms into your character's backstory. Why are they important to them?)

Usage of AI to generate, modify or translate the writing on your application will result in denial of your whitelist. There will be no chance to re-apply afterwards.

Your Response: Candor's gaze speaks its own tale, a visage beset by decades of haunted dreams and memories. The light glaze within the monk's eyes vanish but only for a moment after each blink, yet a coarse word chokes itself out. "Traveling." A simple response, followed by the silent imbibing of Candor's ordered spirits. "Perhaps... escaping." The man quarter-turns his head towards the North, before returning low to his cups. 

It is only after the liquor takes its hold does Candor speak more, perhaps long after the bartender had given up trying to coax further conversation from the Valkian. "I am... was... within the retinue of a lord of the Valkian Realm. Though, our task was not one of conquest and battle; instead, one of protection. Lord Thenris ruled over a small parcel of mountainous land, just north of Vicomté de Coteaux. A temple... a vault, dedicated to Facet." The man raises his sleeved elbow to cough within it, "we... were meant to guard the relics which the Lord Thenris deemed... threatening." A heavy sigh escapes, though a slight attempt is made to choke it back, "outlaws. No... reivers, wearing the Valkian steels they must have plundered off the patrols." The pilgrim shudders as his memory of the event transpires within his mind, rattling his soul. Brothers felled by familiar blades, crimson staining his once-pristine robes, yet the weapon within the man's hands merely trembled, not arcing until it was much too late. Candor's face grows pale, and while the bartender cannot look within the frozen monk's mind, his expression is all that Maarten needs to offer another drink. 

"It was... a fog, a haze within my sight... I thought I was claimed for the life beyond. Instead, within my hand was a blood-stained blade... and screeches within my mind which clawed for further bloodshed..." A final drink vanishes into the trembling man's gullet, before the flagon is gently placed upon the counter, "that... is when I fled. I knew not what had transpired, yet I feared for the worst... sprinting towards this land of new opportunity, where I may repay my debts to Facet..." 

Character Name: Candor Plenth

Character Race: Human 

Character Age: 38

Brief Physical Description: A tall man of tanned skin, blue eyes, and a lack of hair. Often wearing the cloths of his former Order.

Image of Skin and Figura Model:

Hello, I'm Moony and I'll be handling your application today. I apologize for the wait, there was some discussion about the backstory of your character. I like the appearance of him, and the themes of the backstory are nice. 

One minor change we would like to see is that it would be nice if the vault Candor was involved guarding relics for a mage or his local lord, rather than it being tied directly to the King-Emperor himself. Once these changes are made I'll look back over your application and continue processing it. 

If you have any questions, concerns, or require any clarification please feel free to reach out here or on Avalore's Discord. 

 

@Moony Thank you, I've made the necessary changes (and fixed a single grammar mistake)!

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Basic plugin, mod, and Figura information can be found under the Guides section of the Forum. There's also an excellent write-up by community member Pyrias which is designed to help newcomers get started and connected, readable here.

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