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Approved werewolfsilver's whitelist application - [APPROVED- RAPTURE]
Started by werewolfsilver

OOC

Minecraft Username: werewolfsilver

Are you at least 18 years old?: Yes.

Have you read the rules? (Link): yes

(Optional) How did you hear about Avalore?: A friend!

(Max. 1) Were you referred by someone? If so, please provide their in-game username: Lyressi0887 

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins): 

Heyo! I'm a person who mostly roams around servers, chilling alongside otherpeople. I also make my own skins, though it does take. . .(a very. . . long... time from my lack of motivation, or boredom.) Anyways, yeah, sup.

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The sound of clinking glasses and idle chatter welcome you in as you find yourself stepping into The Full Cask. An older man with a full mustache and warm smile beckons you over to the bar he's tending. His gazes washes over you, a glint of some knowing look shining in his eyes. As you sit, his voice rumbles out:

"Hello there stranger! What can I get for you?" 

After you order, he continues to make small talk. "You must be a newcomer. I'm Maarten, glad to meet you." He says with a certain kindness in his tone. 

"Tell me, what brings you to the Spire?"

 

How do you respond (in character)(250 word minimum - please make sure to include at least three references to our lore in your response, with two coming from different pages in the Compendium.  Two of the three selected should also be in-depth, avoid simply name-dropping lore terms. Tie the terms into your character's backstory. Why are they important to them?)

Usage of AI to generate, modify or translate the writing on your application will result in denial of your whitelist. There will be no chance to re-apply afterwards.

Your Response:

She entered, the woman had a blue mask which covered her eyes, only her lips were seen, she walked along in certain clothing. She glanced around the room as she sat down. She smiled towards the man, her leg crossed over her leg as she yawned slightly. Her ears were hidden by her golden lush hair, but it seemed cut in a bad way, she most likely cut her hair with some knife or something. She would be practicing handsign along the way, she seemed quite good at it too.

She first spoke in Elvish, such an ancient language "Ale-" As she paused, clearing her throat, speaking in common. "Evening, . . . let's see, I'll take two ales. I do quite like my drinks along my travels." She glanced along the room, quite a small place compared to her own place. "Coming down from Koram recently, consider it business here." Her gloved hand held the cup of ale as it was brought, her smile widened as she drank the entire ale in one go. "Such a lovely refined taste, consider it a lovely gift towards me!" She choked from drinking too fast, coughing slightly. . . "Dear. . . it seems I drank too fast, though fret not!" She paused as she was asked. 

"The Spire, you see. . . I come for business to meet with someone here, consider it as a way of deals." She elegantly wipe her face with her gloved hand, not touching the ale that dripped alongside, "Though for work?. . . I'll probably get some work down here, down at Koram. . . it was just too peaceful, considering it a vile nature to my head. I want to be able to bring more medicine work down at the spire, maybe tailoring too." The woman drank the second cup of ale in one go, as she smiled brightly, "Ale is always good when you are tired, though. . . Sir Maarten, you do quite a good ale..." She smirked as she said that, waiting for a response. "Though, I want to visit the mountains sometimes, it could be a good drinking spot sometime for myself. Though from what I've heard from the Midlands, a place quite a busy place from studies that I have seen... I wonder what type of drinks they have."

The woman stood up placing the remaining amount of money left, she tripped as her mask and hair fell back. She stood up as he could see her purple eyes in view, she quickly put her mask on and adjusted her hair, her face reddened, as she covered it up.

". . .You didn't see that." Her voice was cold as she adjusted her hair, clearing her throat. . . "...If you don't tell anyone, I'll do a free medicine exam on you..."

Character Name: 

Marianna Elianë Célestia

Character Race: 
Asra Sidhe

Character Age:
54

Character Height:

6'7

Brief Physical Description:

A woman who wore a dress fused into an outfit of an adventure, her face was covered by a blue mask, as her ears were covered by her hair. She stood elegantly, though with a slight smell of alcohol. She had a blue earring on the left side of her ear, though hidden away with her hair. To people who look closely, her ears could be visible.


Image of Skin and Figura Model:

Silver from the deadlock game

Hello, werewolfsilver! My name is Rapture, and I will be handling your Whitelist application. I have a couple of points for you to fix before I can mark this as approved!

- Please go through your text response and fix some of the grammatical errors and clean up your text a little.
- While you do have /some/ lore references, primarily it's regarding language or your character being Asra Sidhe. Burry yourself a little deeper into our lore and find something to intertwine with your character! I'm sure you'll find something creative to engage with.
- You're missing some details about your character. What color are their eyes? Some of your description is also covered up by your image; please fix that.

When you've made these edits to your application, you can ping me here or on Discord @CHILDOFRAPTURE. You can also reach out to me for any questions or assistance!

~ [ Welcome! ] ~

Your whitelist application has been accepted! The server is currently running on Minecraft version 1.21.1, and can be joined by connecting with the IP: mc.avalore.net.

Basic server plugin, modpack, and Figura information can be found under the Guides section of the Forum (although the modpack is optional). There's also an excellent write-up by community member Pyrias which is designed to help newcomers get started and connected, readable here.

I'd also recommend taking a look at Character Profiles. There you can find information on other players' characters as well as make a profile for your own, or read the in-character journals and other writings related to them. Remember to join the Discord here, as well.

Should you ever have any questions you can ask on the Discord in the appropriate channels, make a Ticket, or reach out to a member of the Community team!