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Pending Whitelist Application - Matan Moonwhisper [Pending - Lumu]
Started by matthewbrown0130

Read the following prompt:

The sound of clinking glasses and idle chatter welcome you in as you find yourself stepping into The Full Cask. An older man with a full mustache and warm smile beckons you over to the bar he's tending. His gazes washes over you, a glint of some knowing look shining in his eyes. As you sit, his voice rumbles out:

"Hello there stranger! What can I get for you?" 

After you order, he continues to make small talk. "You must be a newcomer. I'm Maarten, glad to meet you." He says with a certain kindness in his tone. 

"Tell me, what brings you to the Spire?"

 

*Matan would enter the bar as he sat at the stool as his cloak like hood for a mage like him covered his eyes other than the one silver shoulder pad that would glow in the lime light as the barkeeper was a bit too cheery for his taste during this time of the day*

 

“Ah greetings. Some Travelers tea with a tad bit of a blend to it.”

 

*As the Barman prepares the travelers tea for matan as he made small talk towards him as he hasn't seen anyone with a cloak and a sword at their hip*

 

“Well I am new to the Spire of course, but I'm always willing to make friends here.”

 

“The name’s Matan, Nice to meet you Maarten. It has been a good while since I've seen a friendly face since my trip here.”

 

*Matan would think about the question the Barman Maarten asked about what brings him here to the spire he had a reason but never wanted to share with anyone*

 

“Very well, I'm not used to telling anyone this but allow me to explain. I was born in The North, in the Kingdom of Tannit to be more specific both of my parents being Warriors within both of my parents being human and passing down their teachings and training to me despite me wanting to learn magic while i am a warrior other than us having to leave to the Faded Steppe to be exact and to get away from the cold… and try and start a farm to the Faded Steppe.”

 

*Matan says as he looks at his family symbols tattooed on his arm symbolizing honor and balance of his family's legacy as a Warrior that has fought so many battles* 



“My Uncle told me a tale of two warriors like my parents. He would always come here before the disappearance. He never came back, I came to look for answers for what happened to him as well as my parents or if it was because of my family's rude nature of there being pure warriors who don't  learn magic, or if both my parents and Uncle have gone missing.



“I came  through here when I left the Midlands that's…. The last place where I saw my parents….”

 

*Matan was touched and saddened by having to say that as he remembered the tattoos given to him by his parents before they were last seen in the Midlands as a tear goes down his eye*

 

“I’m more of an adventurer when it comes to being a warrior and wanting to learn some magic, Sometimes it comes to me. Or I find it sometimes but my true purpose is learning more about the Aedell if there is anything about the warriors and how they trained back then.” 

 

*Matan says as he takes a sip of travelers tea as he sides over a stack of gold to the barkeeper as he gives him a nod as he unhoods himself*

 

“I appreciate you hearing my story and for the Travelers tea my friend.”

 

*Matan says as he takes a sip of travelers tea and nods to the Barkeeper*

 

**Character Name: Matan (Matt) Moonwhisper**

**Character Race: Human**

**Character Age: 25**

**Character height: 195cm (6’5)**

**Brief physical description:** Matt is slightly taller for a human muscular, skinny and lean, light brown curly hair with blue tattoos on his right arm symbolizing his family's legacy of warriors before him with a red and black cloak with one shoulder pad on the right and having bandages wrapped around both of his hands and  a sword from his family and its holder on his back   

Hello! I'm Lumu, and I'll be helping out on this whitelist 🐈

Before I can review anything else; I'll need you to re-add and fill out the OOC section (as required) first as we'll need things such as your minecraft ign to whitelist for example

Please feel free to leave a reply once this is edited, and I'll get back to it when I'm able 🐾

Sodalite
The Fey's Maestro

ok! my dearest apologies about that i was in a rush 

OOC

Minecraft Username: Nightcrawler130

Are you at least 18 years old?: yes 23 actually

Have you read the rules? (Link): yes

(Optional) How did you hear about Avalore?: from a friend 

(Max. 1) Were you referred by someone? If so, please provide their in-game username: Cosmobeans

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins): my name is matt i've been roleplaying on Minecraft for a while a bit of a dnd nerd for when it comes to fantasy i like war and adventure books for when it comes to it and im good with making minecraft skins for when it comes to dnd and also being a wizard for when it comes to fantisy

 

Read the following prompt:

The sound of clinking glasses and idle chatter welcome you in as you find yourself stepping into The Full Cask. An older man with a full mustache and warm smile beckons you over to the bar he's tending. His gazes washes over you, a glint of some knowing look shining in his eyes. As you sit, his voice rumbles out:

"Hello there stranger! What can I get for you?" 

After you order, he continues to make small talk. "You must be a newcomer. I'm Maarten, glad to meet you." He says with a certain kindness in his tone. 

"Tell me, what brings you to the Spire?"

 

*Matan would enter the bar as he sat at the stool as his cloak like hood for a mage like him covered his eyes other than the one silver shoulder pad that would glow in the lime light as the barkeeper was a bit too cheery for his taste during this time of the day*

 

“Ah greetings. Some Travelers tea with a tad bit of a blend to it.”

 

*As the Barman prepares the travelers tea for matan as he made small talk towards him as he hasn't seen anyone with a cloak and a sword at their hip*

 

“Well I am new to the Spire of course, but I'm always willing to make friends here.”

 

“The name’s Matan, Nice to meet you Maarten. It has been a good while since I've seen a friendly face since my trip here.”

 

*Matan would think about the question the Barman Maarten asked about what brings him here to the spire he had a reason but never wanted to share with anyone*

 

“Very well, I'm not used to telling anyone this but allow me to explain. I was born in The North, in the Kingdom of Tannit to be more specific both of my parents being Warriors within both of my parents being human and passing down their teachings and training to me despite me wanting to learn magic while i am a warrior other than us having to leave to the Faded Steppe to be exact and to get away from the cold… and try and start a farm to the Faded Steppe.”

 

*Matan says as he looks at his family symbols tattooed on his arm symbolizing honor and balance of his family's legacy as a Warrior that has fought so many battles* 



“My Uncle told me a tale of two warriors like my parents. He would always come here before the disappearance. He never came back, I came to look for answers for what happened to him as well as my parents or if it was because of my family's rude nature of there being pure warriors who don't  learn magic, or if both my parents and Uncle have gone missing. i searched at the Midlands where they were heading towards..."

*Matan says as he looks down at his drink before he finishes as a warrior's heart took his toll on the ones he lost during the dissappearance*

“I came through here when I left the Midlands that's…. The last place where I saw my parents….”

 

*Matan was touched and saddened by having to say that as he remembered the tattoos given to him by his parents before they were last seen in the Midlands as a tear goes down his eye*

 

“I’m more of an adventurer when it comes to being a warrior and wanting to learn some magic, Sometimes it comes to me. Or I find it sometimes but my true purpose is learning more about the Aedell if there is anything about the warriors and how they trained back then.” 

 

*Matan says as he takes a sip of travelers tea as he sides over a stack of gold to the barkeeper as he gives him a nod as he unhoods himself*

 

“I appreciate you hearing my story and for the Travelers tea my friend.”

 

*Matan says as he takes a sip of travelers tea and nods to the Barkeeper*

 

**Character Name: Matan (Matt) Moonwhisper**

**Character Race: Human**

**Character Age: 25**

**Character height: 195cm (6’5)**

**Brief physical description:** Matt is slightly taller for a human muscular, skinny and lean, light brown curly hair with blue tattoos on his right arm symbolizing his family's legacy of warriors before him with a red and black cloak with one shoulder pad on the right and having bandages wrapped around both of his hands and  a sword from his family and its holder on his back  

here we go again im so sorry i was in a rush to complete this from yesterday but hopefully the ooc is alright as well as my added touches to it to make it more interesting 

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Hello! I've been a little busy, apologies. I must inquire before I look it through properly another few times when I'm free again; but does the disappearance referenced in your IC section refer to the Great Disappearance? Or did the uncle just disappear one day unrelated to the event? Since from reading, it seems to imply the first to me.

Sodalite
The Fey's Maestro

Well kinda on the during the great disappearance idk if its alright due to me trying to make my character lore accurate currently but if you'd like i can change it to the uncle disappearing one day due to him being taken somewhere or just gone apologies im just nervous about this and willing to make some changes to my chara also its quite alright i too have been busy but im thinking of him disappearing all of a sudden because of someone or something that draw his attention and it being the last he saw of his uncle but like i said i can change it if you'd like so it'll fit into the lore much better 

It would be nice to change it yes! The Great Disappearance of the Aedall happened 50 years ago from the current IC year of 1642 AC, so it's a little hard to believe that it would happen in a period of time Matan would've known of.

There's a few other things as well that I'd like to add on top of that. It's a little difficult to read due to lack of punctuation, run on sentences and the such, so apologies if I misread or misunderstand anything;

- Your lore is getting there! But I'd like to see a little more elaboration and some clarification on your lore to be safe to achieve the requirement of in-depth lore as to me most of it is kind of just being name dropped. I'd like to just see the lore tie in properly with your character. Being born and raised to be a warrior makes sense; but why did they suddenly leave the North to go to the Faded Steppe? Did the whole family leave due to something happening? Or was it just due to wanting a change of pace? They seem highly intent on being respected warriors from what I'm getting, so it's a little odd to me they'd just up and leave without reason.
- After heading to the Steppe to settle, why did the parents leave again? They don't necessarily need a known reason to your character, but again; it feels quite disconnected and more of a name drop of lore than something tied in.
- The Great Disappearance part has been touched on already
>> "I’m more of an adventurer when it comes to being a warrior and wanting to learn some magic, Sometimes it comes to me. Or I find it sometimes"
- Does the it in this section hint to Arcane Affinity? There's no issue if yes-- we have a handful of people who start with the feat, but I just want to make sure as characters can't begin as mages 👍

Please don't feel the need to rush through your application! Once the points above have been taken and edited in your own time, feel free to leave a reply and I'll get back to it when I'm able. If you have any questions, or require help; you can always ask in the discord! 🐈🐾

Sodalite
The Fey's Maestro

alright here you go i did get the points i do apologize about my typing being difficult to understand also i did change the great disappearance thing and added some details within the Kingdom of Tannit and made a reasoning for them leaving it to head to the Faded Steppe hopefully this gets all the points good thing i took my time with this carefully but I'm just hoping this gets all the points with the details i added into the story and the reasoning on leaving the north and just gonna hope it helps ties into the lore 

 

 

OOC

Minecraft Username: Nightcrawler130

Are you at least 18 years old?: yes 23 actually

Have you read the rules? (Link): yes

(Optional) How did you hear about Avalore?: from a friend 

(Max. 1) Were you referred by someone? If so, please provide their in-game username: Cosmobeans

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins): my name is matt i've been roleplaying on Minecraft for a while a bit of a dnd nerd for when it comes to fantasy i like war and adventure books for when it comes to it and im good with making minecraft skins for when it comes to dnd and also being a wizard for when it comes to fantisy

 

 

Read the following prompt:

The sound of clinking glasses and idle chatter welcome you in as you find yourself stepping into The Full Cask. An older man with a full mustache and warm smile beckons you over to the bar he's tending. His gazes washes over you, a glint of some knowing look shining in his eyes. As you sit, his voice rumbles out:

"Hello there stranger! What can I get for you?" 

After you order, he continues to make small talk. "You must be a newcomer. I'm Maarten, glad to meet you." He says with a certain kindness in his tone. 

"Tell me, what brings you to the Spire?"

 

*Matan would enter the bar as he sat at the stool as his cloak like hood for a mage like him covered his eyes other than the one silver shoulder pad that would glow in the lime light as the barkeeper was a bit too cheery for his taste during this time of the day*

 

“Ah greetings, Some Travelers tea with a tad bit of a blend to it.”

 

*As the Barman prepares the travelers tea for matan as he made small talk towards him as he hasn't seen anyone with a cloak and a sword at their hip*

 

“Well, I am new to the Spire of course, but I'm always willing to make friends here.”

 

“The name’s Matan, Nice to meet you Maarten. It has been a good while since I've seen a friendly face since my trip here.”

 

*Matan would think about the question the Barkeeper Maarten asked about what brings him here to the spire he had a reason but never wanted to share with anyone due to memories of his loved ones due to what a old rival did to him*

 

“I'm.. not used to telling anyone this but allow me to explain. I was born in The North, in the Kingdom of Tannit to be more specific, both of my parents being Moon Warriors, Well warriors in the snow wearing white clothing and armor within my family’s long bloodline of warriors that dressed in white clothing as it was destined for me to carry the torch. Being strict, I followed in their footsteps.. I grew up training every second of every day. As they were wanting to pass down their teachings and training to me despite what the others have said about me being a weak link of the ranks but would get above it from time to time thanks to my uncles and my parent’s support, There was a day though in the tournament that would hold the strongest garrison within the Kingdom of Tannit i was up against a brute named Bjorn the first who mocked me for being a weak link now was going up against me when i first started once the match began there was a condition.. That the loser of the match would have to leave the Kingdom of Tannit…. Once the match began i nearly won but until Bjorn decided to try and kill me at the spot that's when a couple of guards including my Uncle came to get me out of there as Bjorn hurted my hands in the process.. Bandaged and patched up my uncle wanted there to be a rematch for him to fight but I turned it down as vengeance wasn’t the answer to a fight or even worth getting yourself killed. And with that I got a second place tattoo on my arm then my family, My uncle, and I left the kingdom of Tannit to the Faded Steppe to settle there to keep the peace to survive and away from Bjorn and his cohorts due to them wanting revenge.. As none left a mark from a blade on him until now as Bjorn hated the Moonwhisper bloodline and was jealous that they were liked while he wasn't. So my family and I had to leave to survive and keep the legacy alive."

 

*Matan says as he looks at his family symbols tattooed on his arm symbolizing honor and balance of his family's legacy as a Warrior that has fought so many battles including one from the tournament as Matan took another sip of travelers tea as he continues with his story* 



“My Uncle from the other side of the kingdom of Tannit told me a tale of two warriors like my parents. He would always come to the Bar before the fights if it were to be his last. To share his war stories to those who were interested or who listened. The allies he’s made to the enemies he faced until one day my parents and my uncle were nowhere to be seen  in the Faded Steppe until there were foot tracks that lead to the Midlands… From there I heard that they were kidnapped by someone or something so i followed the trail to the Midlands until i saw hired bandits killing my parents then beating my uncle to a pulp  in their camp as they were sent by Bjorn, On that day the fury in my heart grew as i took one of the bandits swords and went into battle with them as the battle was done and the bandits retreated i rushed to my uncles side.. His dying words still echoing into my head ‘Take my sword, and bring balance and peace to the innocent at the Spire Moonwhisper..’ as he passed right in my arms… so i took his sword to honor his memory and my family's Legacy and couldn't return to the Faded Steppe if they knew where we once lived so i arrived at the Spire to start fresh… and see what Adventures lie for me here. For their sake I took a red cloak and a sword holder my uncle had been saving to give to me when I turned 26 and used it as a symbol of who I once was. Once I buried them at a good spot I made my way to the Spire to begin my own journey wherever it'll take me as a warrior, as a wonderer i go their as myself.” 




*Matan was touched and saddened by having to say that as he remembered the tattoos given to him by his parents before they and his uncle were last seen in the Midlands killed by bandits.. as a tear goes down his eye*

 

“I’m more of an adventurer when it comes to being a warrior and I can fight despite my bandages on my hands that keep a reminder for me to press on and bringing Balance and peace wherever I wander off too and to try and keep the peace as that would be what my folks would've wanted.”

 

*Matan says as he takes a sip of travelers tea as he sides over a stack of gold to the barkeeper as he gives him a nod as he unhoods himself*

 

“I appreciate you hearing my story and for the Travelers tea my friend.”

 

*Matan says as he takes a sip of travelers tea and nods to the Barkeeper*

 

**Character Name: Matan (Matt) Moonwhisper**

 

**Character Race: Human**

 

**Character Age: 25**

 

**Character height: 195cm (6’5)**

 

**Brief physical description:** Matt is slightly taller for a human muscular, skinny and lean, light brown curly hair with blue tattoos on his right arm symbolizing his family's legacy of warriors before him with a red and black cloak with one shoulder pad on the right and having bandages wrapped around both of his hands and  a sword from his family and its holder on his back