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Denied Ashley Fox [Denied - Moony]
Started by Asshesly

OOC

Minecraft Username:  Ashley_Fox

Are you at least 18 years old?: I’m 19

Have you read the rules? (Link): Yes!

(Optional) Were you referred by someone? If so, who: 

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins):

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)? (150 words minimum - please make sure to include some references to our lore in your response!)

“I’m not nervous just thinking, I was born here but not raised. I have come here looking for something dear to me that I lost. I know I’ll find it I just have to keep looking, I’m running low on funds so I might need to stay here for a while. My mother actually fell in love with my father here, and had me before leaving to Korami. I hope I can find what I’m looking for soon, it is driving me crazy. Even if I have to get my hands dirty I will do anything it takes to find-. Never mind that…apologies sometimes my upbringing affects my mental. *clutches their families heirloom blade* I miss my mother, she taught me everything, one day I wish to be reincarnated and meet with her again. Never mind that would you perhaps know of anyone needing help? I’m thinking of setting up shop to sell my talents. Or perhaps someone that needs to be protected? Anything helps my cause I just need to stack up money. I am still not the best with combat though unfortunately, I will continue to train though while here. Maybe I should look into finding a mentor to help in my combat abilities or perhaps something I have been interested in since I was a child.”

Character Name: Ashley Iyla Fox

Character Race: Human/Elf

Character Age: 25

Brief Physical Description: Purple pinkish eyes, Long black hair, Human ears, Short frame, pretty maiden. 

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Hey there Asshesly,

I'm Moony and I'll be reviewing your application! So far it seems like you're on the right track but I feel as though we could include some more lore into your written response section from Avalore's Compendium. Some suggestions I have are maybe looking at what culture your character is from and mentioning more about that, or perhaps delving more about what's bringing them to The Spire and The Reach. 

Also, if you look through the forums and check out the Arcane section you'll find we have a mage application system in place, so your character won't be able to start off knowing magic or spells. Maybe you can edit your written response to mention she has a thirst for knowledge and wants to become a mage in time.

Either way, I look forward to your response and please feel free to message me on the forums or through Discord. I'm Moony on Avalore's Discord and my PMs are open if you need help or advice. 

Okay thank you I will get to this

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I hope that is better! 😭

Hey Asshesly,

Unfortunately I'm going to decline your application for now. When you take some time to read deeper into the lore I would love to revisit this. Please take more time reading the compendium.

When you've done this we would be happy to look at a new and fresh application from you that showcases some more aspects of lore.