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Denied Whitelist application [Denied - Moony]
Started by MR_BRA

OOC

Minecraft Username: MR_BRA

Are you at least 18 years old?:yes

Have you read the rules? (Link):yes

(Optional) Were you referred by someone? If so, who: I found the server on my own

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins):

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)(150 words minimum - please make sure to include some references to our lore in your response!)

— The young Greatling would stare at the elderly woman not knowing how to respond. He would simply grunt and shake his head "Never nervous.." He would then look towards the horizon. Indeed this young Giant wasn't nervous. He was consumed by other feelings such as anger, sadness, curiosity. Still looking at the distant world in front of him he would speak using mix of simple tongue and Fireborne accent. "Fire Dragon with me" he would point at himself "Looking for my peoples" He would look back at the woman "I needs to find a land with fire pools, Do you knows where it is? Bazron must finds it. There I find peoples" He would thump his chest with his finger still point at himself signaling that where he is heading he will find more Giants like him. "Bazron finds peoples and Bazron finally belongs" Looking into the sky with a dreamy expression "Soon".

Character Name: Bazron

Character Race: Greatling

Character Age: 22

Brief Physical Description: A 8'3" young Greatling with grey skin that has an oragne tint to it. His brown eyes looking at you with curiosity. This young Giant was born somewhere in the Southern Reach, although if you dare to ask him where he was born, he can't tell you because he himself doesn't know. He doesn't remember much and from the first glance at him you can tell he is a simple Giant, who doesn't know much and doesn't need much, but when taught properly he can still become a proper lad.

Hello, I'm Moony and I'll be handling your application.

It's looking good so far, there's only one thing I want to ask to clear up. Are you stating, in the "Brief Physical Description" that Bazron was born in The Spire, or are you saying he was born in the general region of The Southern Reach?

If you have any questions or concerns otherwise, feel free to reach out here or through the Avalore Discord where I'm also Moony. 

I'm going to deny this due to the amount of time that has passed without a response. Please feel free to re-apply.