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Approved whitelist [Approved - NOS402]
Started by gamerdoctor44

Minecraft Username: Gamerdoctor44

Are you at least 18 years old?: yes

Have you read the rules? (Link): yes

(Optional) Were you referred by someone? If so, who: MotherChai

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins):

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)(150 words minimum - please make sure to include some references to our lore in your response!)

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“I turned towards the other lady, giving her my full attention as I slightly stutter over my words” well you see I wanted to “I stuttered, trying to mask my accent Since she was a Falstoner in the south east and speaking many languages they picked up their own accent from their years of travel.

” It was very cold where I was from so I would love to start anew somewhere else warmer, and I've heard many good things about the Spire, I feel like there could be a future for myself where I start a whole new journey separate from cold, dead winters. Ever since the great disappearance, we have been suffering from the fall of the economy as the people scatter money became almost impossible to obtain but the worst was the worrying about my family's survival through the cold winter nights”

/They sat in the wagon thinking about how It was hard for those many light cycles we barely scraped by till push came to shove. The cold winters became too much as we started to drop like flies slowly. being consumed by the cold, the hunger started to set in, as the rations ran out the madness took hold. Actions were taken to where our dead became our source of food and to those that had pushed away–/ Their breath shuttered /But now we head to the spire a place of promise and never forget what had happened./

I give her an attempt at a warm smile as I return my gaze back to the endless field. I took off my coat, glad I could be rid of such heavy gear and dress considerably lighter in this new world I find myself in. "I remember how when i was younger I had received these clothes while trading with this girl the same age as I she was nice and many good story's were told between her and I, if only we meet again I would of called here a friend"

Character Name: Mya

Character Race:  human 

Character Age: 32

Brief Physical Description: short and stubby, short brown hair with white streak, she wears kimono and she has brown skin with green eyes

Hi! I am NOS402 and I will be reviewing your whitelist application!

There are a few tweaks I would advise that you apply to your application:

  1. All mentions regarding lore are all fairly surface level. Maybe dive a bit more on what day-to-day life as a Falstoner was like before the Disappearnce happened?
  2. Be careful of run-on sentences! As our medium of communication for the server is text it is important to check your grammar!
  3. Your character is wearing a kimono, which there isn't a problem with it if you can explain it! The Falstone cultural group is more associated with west European farmers, and east Asian styles like the kimono would be found in the Korami cultural group. This could be a good expansion on your character if you explained how Mya got the kimono as a Falstoner!

Take these into consideration and let me know when you have re-written your application.

If you have any questions or concerns regarding these points feel free to contact me through the forums or through Avalore's Discord.

Thank you!

Just a couple fellas in the mountains, helping each other climbmax

hey idk what the time limit is to update just wanted to let you know I'm still working on it

gamerdoctor44:

hey idk what the time limit is to update just wanted to let you know I'm still working on it

All good, applications are auto-denied after about a week of inactivity. But even then, players are still free to submit another application!


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alright idk what else to do rather then burn it down and start over so is it okay

- Congratulations and Welcome -

Your whitelist application is approved. The server runs on 1.18.2 and you can connect using the IP: mc.avalore.net.

Consider creating a profile for your character in the Character Profiles section of the forums!

If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me or another member of our Community team either on the forums or through our Discord.

Just a couple fellas in the mountains, helping each other climbmax