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Approved Application Simba Whitelist [Approved - Nomad]
Started by Simba

OOC

Minecraft Username: SimbaTheFatDog

Are you at least 18 years old?: Yes

Have you read the rules? (Link): Yes

(Optional) Were you referred by someone? If so, who: No

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins): No

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)(150 words minimum)

A heavy and ragged breath escapes twisted lips as Kaisel stares at the creeping clouds with a blank stare. An audible groan escapes as he staggers to his feet, his hand absently rubbing the back of his head. "Nervous enough to trip on my own two feet" he'd mutter with a chuckle, glancing towards the older woman who offered her attention. 

"To the spire" he'd reply before continuing, "New town's going to be in need of some new bodies. It'll be a nice fresh start than just working in the midlands" he'd say, brushing the dust off of his worn pants, his belts and buckles clanging against one another as he did so. His eyes would narrow towards the woman as he offered a smile "And what brings you here?" he'd ask, his brows furrowing with intrigue. 

As he waited for her response, his attention momentarily drifted to the endless expanse before them. The horizon that stretched across the plains. The cold whisper of the wind that tugged on the blades of grass. Yes. A new start.

Character Name: Kaisel

Character Race: Human

Character Age: 25

Brief Physical Description: A young man standing at approximately 5'10, weighing 165lbs. Kaisel sports an array of belts and buckles strapped around his waist and shoulders to carry his equipment. His black hair is often unkempt and dangles to the sides of his temples.

Pending

Hey Simba, I'm gonna have to put your application in a pending state for the time being. Here are the key issues to fix:
- Please take a look over the lore and mix it into your application, if you could. This was the biggest issue. You can find our lore in the compendium on the tab up above. I would also recommend taking a look over the mechanics if you get a chance, so you have a better understanding how the server works.
- There were a few grammatical and misspelling errors, nothing major.

Once those are fixed, just lemme know and I'll give it another look over.

Welcome to Avalore!

Good news Simba, your application is approved! You can find the IP on the front page, and if you wish, you can also make a profile for your character in the Character Profiles forum!

And if you have any questions, feel free to ask anyone on the community team. Take care!