OOC

Minecraft Username:  Shadow

Are you at least 18 years old?: Yes

Have you read the rules? (Link):

(Optional) How did you hear about Avalore?: From a friend. 

(Max. 1) Were you referred by someone? If so, please provide their in-game username:

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins): I'm an artist by trade, 15+ years in entertainment industries,  and when I play I mostly just mine and build. 

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In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)? (250 word minimum - please make sure to include at least three references to our lore in your response, with two coming from different pages in the Compendium.  Two of the three selected should also be in-depth, avoid simply name-dropping lore terms. Tie the terms into your character's backstory. Why are they important to them?) 

With the sun beaming down after a long voyage, it was easy to get lost in the moment, until the voice of an older woman snaps me back to the moment. Looking down,  there is an elderly lady that seems to be making some small talk "Oh, well yes, it's my first time here, and just taking in the sights. It's been a long journey to get here, and I'm going to try and make the most of it. I came from an area around Korami, and couldn't take the squabbles anymore. I ventured off, and traveled across the land wherever I was able to go, and adopted some local styles like some from the Valks and the Falstoner, among other local areas and people, and gathered information. Eventually I found myself here." Thinking a bit, looking around at the commotion. "I'll be honest, I set off because I heard the tale of the Lady of the Lake,  and I figured if I could get any more information on how to come across her, it would be here. But of course that's not the only reason.."

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Character Name: Scáth McGuinness (pronounced "Skall")

Character Race: Half Human Half Greatling

Character Age: 35

Brief Physical Description: Broad in body,  strong,  tall,  with a couple extra pounds similar to the build of a powerful Irish Brawler. Brown slicked back hair under a hat,  brownish hazelish eyes with an emerald ring around the iris, a trimmed beard running along the jawline, and a rather imposing stature.

Hello!

My name is cosmic_evil, and I'll be reviewing your application with us today!

The first thing that I notice with this application is that there is no username listed. In order for us to whitelist you, we will need a username to add to the whitelist.

Secondly, I do note that you mention you're mostly interested in mining and building - I feel compelled to inform you that there is no mining or building on this server, not in the way that you might expect. There are player houses, which you can buy if one becomes available, but the limit of your build will be within the singular building or plot that you rent. The focus of this community is on roleplay, we do not cater very much if at all to any other playstyles you may be used to seeing.

And, lastly - for your in character response; I do certainly see a lot of individual references to the lore, however we are looking for a bit more than generally naming off the locations and names of lore pages. We need in-depth references to them, in order for me to approve this you'll need to read through the passages of the compendium and fully incorporate the lore into your in-character section. Additionally, your response does not meet the 250 word minimum to be accepted, with only 186 words you will need to write more to fill that requirement.

If you have any questions, feel free to ask here on the thread - or you can dm me directly on discord @cosmic_evil! Make sure to update here or on discord once you've made these changes!

Hello! Going to go ahead and decline this since its been inactive for over a week. Feel free to apply again if you're ever interested in joining the community!