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Denied Perik Whitelist Application [Denied - Moony]
Started by Perkins

OOC

Minecraft Username: Periklis_

Are you at least 18 years old?: I am 22 years old

Have you read the rules? (Link): Yes

(Optional) How did you hear about Avalore?: PMC

(Max. 1) Were you referred by someone? If so, please provide their in-game username: N/A

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins): 

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)(250 word minimum - please make sure to include at least three references to our lore in your response, with two coming from different pages in the Compendium.  Two of the three selected should also be in-depth, avoid simply name-dropping lore terms. Tie the terms into your character's backstory. Why are they important to them?)

The massive Greatling-Thing would give the old woman but a simple glance, weighting whether he is to talk to her or keep on daydreaming in peace and quiet until he were to reach his destination. Deciding that it was best to talk, Brutaz turned to the old woman, glowing fiery eyes fixed onto her, a guttural and cold voice speaking.

"The name is Brutaz 'The Flamebull'. I come here beckoned by a dream shown to me by 'The Fire Dragon' of the Ashlands, our mighty Spirit. He spoke to me, told me to come into this untamed land of Southern-Reach where the Elf-Kin disappeared not so long ago and hunt it's wild beasts. The Dragon wishes for me to slay them , take trophies of them, for each trophy burnt in a pyre is venerating 'The Spirit's' name. If I give him enough to devour and sustain his divine essence, he will reward me, make me his Champion and earn my right to dine in the Halls of Ashes , where all great warriors of the Fireborne Clans dine, fight and enjoy their eternity. That is the reason why I am here, elder one."

He grunted then , keeping quiet and watching as their wagon grew near to the famed city afloat the Sky, The Spire. His Fey-Touched aflame eyes staring up at the fortress-settlement in hidden awe, eager to explore it and earn the fame he deserves.

Character Name: Brutaz 'The Flamebull'

Character Race: Half-Greatling (Greatling x Fey-Touched, though he considers himself a Greatling or a Fire Giant)

Character Age: 21

Brief Physical Description: Brutaz is a massive herculean figure, standing at 8'2 feet tall and sporting the physique of a muscled warrior. His skin is ashen grey and of minimal hair. His eyes have a Fey-Touched, fiery orange glow to them, akin to burning pyres , while mighty Bull-like horns and goring tusks emerge from head and jaws. He has a septum ring piercing through his nostrils.

Unfortunately your application is denied. You have not demonstrated an understanding of lore and have also interjected your own lore into it. Please read our Compendium before you apply again.