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Approved Aelia Whitelist application [Approved - Moony]
Started by Tsarielle

OOC

Minecraft Username: Tsarielle

Are you at least 18 years old?: 18

Have you read the rules? (Link): Yes

(Optional) How did you hear about Avalore?: A website! Avalore: Fantasy Roleplay, Reimagined Server IP - Minecraft IP List

(Max. 1) Were you referred by someone? If so, please provide their in-game username: Nope!

(Optional)e.g. art, builds, skins): Hello I'm Lilly, I'm an 18 y/o southern girly looking for a new server to rp on! I like to game, draw, and sing (even if sometimes I'm not very good at it! Thank you for giving this opportunity to join this roleplay <3 Wishing you well times ahead!

-Lilly

Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)(250 word minimum - please make sure to include at least three references to our lore in your response, with two coming from different pages in the Compendium.  Two of the three selected should also be in-depth, avoid simply name-dropping lore terms. Tie the terms into your character's backstory. Why are they important to them?) 

 

I have come to the reach in search of a purpose. I still don’t know what it is, only that it calls to me from some vast, shadowed place beyond the edges of understanding. A pull, quiet but insistent, rising from within me like a tide. I can’t name it. I can’t explain it. But I know it’s real. And I know it’s mine.

It was a friend who awakened this longing,a traveler, an Arsa Sidhe. She moved like moonlight on still water, her presence quiet but impossible to ignore. Her eyes held centuries, her laughter the sound of wind dancing through old trees. There was something otherworldly about her, something that didn’t belong to time or place. With fire in her spirit and dust on her boots, she carried stories like others carried weapons.

She spoke of the world beyond the mountains, of salt-wind and starfall, of forgotten paths and cities where names bore no weight and a soul could wander unburdened. Her life was not bound by blood, by name, or by duty. She chose her path with both hands. She dared. She questioned. She lived.

 

That call led me here, far from home.
Far from the Great Clan of Adarkhin.

I never wanted the life that laid before me there. My family were from a minor clan in Sharuul, known as  Echradyin, and were proud herders for generations, carried a name held in high honor among the clan. But with that name came expectation, rigid, unyielding. I was meant to follow the path carved long before I was born to herd, to obey, to never question.

But I did. I wanted something more. And for that, they turned against me.
So I left, not in shame, but in defiance.

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Character Name: Aelia

Character Race: Fey-touched

Character Age: 18

Brief Physical Description: A short-slim statured woman, delicate pale-blond hair, eyes with a blue hue set in them, fair-skinned.

Hello, I'm Moony and I'll be handling your whitelist application. 

So far you're on the right track but there are a few things that we need to expand upon, and that we need clarification on before I can continue processing your whitelist application:


  • Your test is currently only 187 words, falling short of the 250 word goal. To help reach that, you should go further in-depth on the lore you chose to utilize in your story, as two deep mentions of lore are also a requirement. I can note that you've mentioned Great Clan Adarkhin and Sharuul, but those are unfortunately the only two mentions I see. 
  • Are you saying your character is from the Great Clan Adarkhin itself? You will need to create a minor clan that your character belongs that is under the Great Clan Adarkhin.
  • Being Fey-Touched and Korami works fine, but glistening white hair would only be something that Arsa Sidhe (Elves) have. You can do a pale blonde hair for a Fey-Touched however, as that would not be too too far away from your original idea of Aelia's appearance. 

If you have any questions or concerns please feel free to reach out here, or on the Avalore Discord where my DMs are open. 

I have re-edited it can you take another look?

- Welcome! -

Your whitelist application is approved. The server runs on 1.20.4 and you can connect using the IP: mc.avalore.net.

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