Welcome
To join our community, please log in or register!
New to Avalore?
Head over to the Getting Started page to learn what you need to know!
Internet Explorer
Internet Explorer is not supported. Please upgrade to a more modern browser.

Approved Faeborn's Whitelist Application [Approved - Liciors]
Started by faeborn

OOC

Minecraft Username: Faeborn

Are you at least 18 years old?: Yes

Have you read the rules? (Link): I have! I did not find any sort of passphrase or anything but I wanna say I'm really appreciative of the respectful representation rule. 

(Optional) How did you hear about Avalore?: Through a voting site. Forgot which one. 

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins): Hey! I'm Mélicendre. Dancing.Embers on discord. I've been roleplaying on minecraft servers for a little bit. I love interior decorations and I'm excited to craft cool places!

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)(250 word minimum - please make sure to include at least three references to our lore in your response, with two coming from different pages in the Compendium.  Two of the three selected should also be in-depth, avoid simply name-dropping lore terms. Tie the terms into your character's backstory. Why are they important to them?)

"Yeah I'm nervous. Never been this far past Crossroads yet..."

It is sleepy eyes that greet the old granny. The girl sits back upright, wiping the inky black tears welling at the corner of her eyes into black, sooty marks. Fae-cursed readjusts her scarf and sits upright, letting out a whince. She looks at her swolen ankle with a pained grimace: It's swolen like an overripe pumpkin. 

"
Got in a fight with the old priest back home. -Yes, again!" 

Azar swings her arm up to make a point but painfully scrapes the scales of her forearm against the caravan's frame.  "Damned Dancing Drowners" She exclaims, holding her arm against her chest. She groans in annoyance.  

"It ain't my bloody fault I can't tell no damned holy bushel from the other consecrated holy hedge or somesuch! It's all damn leaves and flowers and- stuff! I don't know!" 

The girl takes a moment to breathe though it doesn't do much to calm her temper. 

"I tried it all! Smithing, alebrewing, foraging, bartering, baking, farming -fuck, I even tried to be a guy for the earlier parts of my life! None of it is working out!" The fire aligned girl meets the eye of the elder with a certain... Sadness deep within. 

"That's why I called you, Auntie. I ain't fit to be a Falstoner- At least, not within the little communities. I wanna be someone. I wanna write music, meet great people, fall in love with a few girls, get in a fight over more than whoever gets to eat the hat or the foot of the mushrooms served at faerie's eve back home. I wanna live! So that's why I joined you at Crossroads. I knew you were headed south." 

The dreamer looked through the cloth of the caravan, admiring the landscape. "Can't promise I'll stay out of trouble though..." 

Character Name: Azar Soothe

Character Race: Fae-Touched (Fire) 

Character Age: 23

Brief Physical Description: Whatever fae curse runs in Azar's veins runs strong. Looking like she had been born in an unsettled coal mine, her skin bears a dark, matte colour quite distinct in its neutral hue from the darker skins other races possess. Her hair, similarly coloured, is kept long, unkempt and slightly curly. Her eyes are the colour of unlit darkness: Black as night. Her tears, dark and ink-like, constantly runs down her face and into her clothes, a condition she has since birth. On her forearms are scales, which she keeps covered under wraps, are sensitive and easy to snag against anything, causing pain. Her fire heritage becomes clearer when she is agitated: Smoke billows out of her mouth when the emotions are high and there is a certain... Focus in her eyes, like a candle in the distant depths of a cave, a volcano showing a hint of its true nature. 

Standing at an average fae-touched height of 4'7", Azar dresses like a falstoner proper. She enjoys cloaks and colourful outfits which grant the girl colour her complexion could never translate. All purpose gloves keep her dextrous in her many endeavours, which may or may not involve the many pockets and pouches she has hidden in her garments. 

Hi there! I'm Liciors and I'll be reviewing your whitelisting application. 

There seems to be some misunderstanding with some of the lore.

  • With the Divine Gardeners/Holy Gardeners, there isn't one being called the Holy Gardener/Divine Gardener. Rather, they are people blessed by the fable, there is no singular entity.
  • Your character refers to themselves as Fey Cursed, rather than Fey touched. Is there a specific reason for this? 

 

If you don't wish to disclose the second point publicly, you can reach out to myself here on the forums, or on Discord. Leave a comment here on this thread once you've edited your original post so I can review!

  • x1

Hello! 
Thank you for the correction on Divine Gardener. It was name-dropped as-is in the Falstoner section and didn't think it was related to something else. I thought it was simply a community thing. I corrected it. 
As for Fae-cursed, the quick reference section (First page when you click on compendium) says that Fae-cursed is an alternative name for the fae-touched. Considering Azar's cynical nature, it just makes sense for her to blame her woes and to call herself by a negative way. It wouldn't necessarily be seen with a good eye by her community and it's probably the reason she uses it! It is not an issue to change it if you don't believe it fitting or if it's an appellation reserved to a specific subcategory of Fae-touched! 
Thanks! 

Gotcha! Thanks for the clarifications! 

Yeah the Divine Gardeners are a fable that your character or other characters can undergo to get a special feat related to it. There are many divine gardeners. You can read more about it in the compendium under "Fables" -> "Divine Gardeners". 

I just wanted clarification cause like you say, being fey-touched can be a negative thing based on circumstance and all. Don't worry about changing that, just wanted clarification as all. All that said...

* Welcome! *

Your whitelist application has been approved! The server runs on Minecraft 1.20.4, and you can connect with server address  mc.avalore.net.

You could consider making a Character Profile to introduce yourself, as well as learn a little about other player characters you'll get to interact with. You can learn about the server's mechanics here, or view guides here to help get acquainted to the various commands and plugins.

Should you have any questions, you can always reach out to myself or another member of the Community team through the forums or on our Discord.