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Denied WhiteListing [Denied - Dinomono]
Started by WhimsicalWills

OOC

Minecraft Username: WhimsicalWills

Are you at least 18 years old?: Yes

Have you read the rules? (Link): Yes

(Optional) How did you hear about Avalore?: A google search

(Max. 1) Were you referred by someone? If so, please provide their in-game username: N/A

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins): Hi, my name is Wills She/They. I have never roleplayed before but I love story creation and theatre.

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)(250 word minimum - please make sure to include at least three references to our lore in your response, with two coming from different pages in the Compendium.  Two of the three selected should also be in-depth, avoid simply name-dropping lore terms. Tie the terms into your character's backstory. Why are they important to them?)

— In all honesty...I am not quite sure. I find myself lost around these parts. The last thing I remember was being sent off by my parents, hearing the ringing sound of their voices in tune with the beating of own my heart. "May the Sun shine upon you". That was what they said to wish me farewell. Knowing myself, something probably spooked me, and I ran right into a tree. OH! Where are my manners, I know better than that. My name is Willow, Or Wills for short, whichever you prefer. I come from the Midlands! I am Valkian if you couldn't tell haha. AH! Sorry I can be very loud, I do remember why I am here. My mother told me she wanted me to explore the world. See people. Apparently, I was becoming "too spoiled" for her liking. I'm sure I'll be able to go back in no time. Once I prove to her...that I am not as spoiled? I actually don't know much of what she wants from me but I'm sure it will be fine. I was blessed with the greenery and more money than I could have imagined, and that's a problem? I beg to differ! My mother is full of it. I guess I will just have to play along with her little game until she notices how much she misses me and begs for me to come back home. Yea...she will come back for me. She has to. I wasn't even that bad. I need to stop psyching msyelf out. Anyways, I should go do whatever it is I need to do now, May the Sun Shine upon you.

Character Name: Willow (Wills) Teramore

Character Race: Human

Character Age: 21

 Brief Physical Description: Long red hair with a blonde stripe, Green eyes, blind in one. Pale skin with freckles. Wears a reddish brown dress and boots

Image of Skin and Figura Model: (Here is a screenshot of my minecraft skin, I am not familiar with what a Figura Model is)

Hello! I'm Dinomono and I'll be reviewing your application, so far you're on the right track but I'd need some more elaboration on another aspect of the Compendium for me to approve you. The template mentions a requirement for at least three references within the text, of which two should be in-depth. So far you have made an in-depth reference of Valkian culture as Willow speaks of it to the old woman, I'd need another as well. Any entry from the compendium is valid, whether you want to add animals, fables or other cultures/places.

Once edits have been made, please respond to this thread so I'm notified and we can continue the review!

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- Signed by Moogy

Due to inactivity, this application has been denied. Feel free to apply again in the future.

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- Signed by Moogy