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Denied BogTFrogsCreater Whitelist Request [Denied - Bliinx]
Started by BogTFrogsCreater

OOC

Minecraft Username: BogTFrogsCreater

Are you at least 18 years old?: Yes

Have you read the rules? (Link): Yes

(Optional) How did you hear about Avalore?: Server listings looking for a place to rp in minecraft

(Max. 1) Were you referred by someone? If so, please provide their in-game username:

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins): My IGN is BogTFrogsCreater, but I go by Bog for short. I mostly play Hardcore Minecraft, as the risk of losing the world on death is a fun challenge.

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)? (250 word minimum - please make sure to include at least three references to our lore in your response, with two coming from different pages in the Compendium.  Two of the three selected should also be in-depth, avoid simply name-dropping lore terms. Tie the terms into your character's backstory. Why are they important to them?)

— "Adventure has always called to me, and with coming of age, I decided to leave the Mist Isles in search of my calling,” I say, my voice singing softly as I speak. “I made a boat with the help of my family and went on an adventure, just like my dad did. Now I’m just following where the wind will take me and seeing what lies ahead.”

“Well then, that is quite a big step into your life. Any reason the wind took you to the Reach?” The old woman asks.

“My father said that the South Reach was breathtaking to see. He painted many landscapes of the place, so I want to see his paintings in real life.” I smile, fidgeting with the feathers on my necklace. “These were my fathers feathers, he left them for me when he left me and Mom behind. I don't blame him for leaving, but I do wish he had taken me with him. The call for adventure is strong, almost an unstoppable force at times.

“Eryndor was a wonderful place to grow up, with all the people going about their days and saying hello or talking about their day. Although, it was not the safest place with the cliffs and sharp rocks below. Children can be cruel about those that are different. Thankfully, not being able to lie is helpful in those situations.”

“Yes, I imagine being fey would be helpful when others spread lies.”

“Extreamly helpful, when they choose the truth. It may not always be pretty and it may hurt, but it is for the best.”

Character Name: Kayden Bog Mizan

Character Race: Half Arsa Sidhe and half Fey-Touched

Character Age: 20

 Brief Physical Description: Short and thin with dark blue hair and red eyes. Feathers grow from the ears. Pale rose skin. Wears a purple sweater, brown pants, and black boots. Has a leather necklace with two feathers attached from their father.

Image of Skin and Figura Model:  

Hello! I'm Moony and I'll be handling your application. 

So far you're on the right track. There are two minor changes to make before I can continue processing your application:

- Being Fey-Touched is different from being fully Fey. Your character, as all Fey-Touched, can tell lies. 

- I'm going to need you to alter the hair color to be more desaturated and a more natural color, similarly the feathers should be desatured!

Thank you!

As it's been over a week with no response, this application is denied for inactivity. If you'd still like to whitelist, you'll need to re-apply and take into account the feedback provided here in the future.