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Approved kiiwiibird Whitelist Application [Approved - Bliinx]
Started by kiiwiibird

Minecraft Username: kiiwiibird

Are you at least 18 years old?: Yes

Have you read the rules? (Link): Yes

Were you referred by someone? If so, please provide their in-game username: birdmandean

Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins): Hello! My name is Kiki. I'm a current student at University and an archival assistant. I love TTRPGs and RP servers. I've been playing D&D 5e for about 6-7 years now (this is not a joke).

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)(250 word minimum - please make sure to include at least three references to our lore in your response, with two coming from different pages in the Compendium.  Two of the three selected should also be in-depth, avoid simply name-dropping lore terms. Tie the terms into your character's backstory. Why are they important to them?)

She turns to look at the woman, her own grin like the cracks in an old oak tree instead of a soft smile. She tilts her head, hair falling as she stares with one bright eye. It's clear that she tries to open the other, the skin pulling at the scarred area, but she does not make any mention of this attempt.

"I'm looking for someone," she said says simply. A little giggle escapes from her mouth as she twists her body, leaning down with her torso against her thighs. It's... abnormally flexible, the movement. "Someone very special. I'm sure you'd understand."

She sits up, then, without warning to stare at the woman again. Her eye grows wider, somehow, grin stretching to match the stare. Another giggle emerges. "So important. It's almost... disappointing. You know, this place, it's... interesting. Nothing like Fallstone, truly." And--well, she preferred Fallstone, to be truthful. There was a community there, an aspect of understanding that passed through them all. Though, yes, Kitty thought herself more of the mischievous type, she heeded the warnings of those elder to her to keep herself in-check. She, like many, had been burned by such trickery before, and should be cautious. She loves Fallstone, as well, the rolling Steppes that seem to go on forever. For a moment she can imagine a life without the debts she's accumulated. A life without the people she despises, and even the people she loves. A peaceful one. And then the caravan begins its march again, and she's reminded that she has a duty. A duty that brings her to the Reach.

Kitty flips her hair and waves a hand as she then shifts her position to sit upside-down, legs dangling above her as her head hangs from the seat. She lets out a sigh, but it's difficult to discern if it's one of boredom or one of annoyance. "I never understand why anyone would ever want to leave. Let alone one of us--" the giggles she keeps allowing to escape seem nearly involuntary, at this point. "Especially not after the chances we've been given. One look at us and--well, I bet you've thought of scooting down the way for a few moments there!"

The next sound is decidedly not a giggle, but a pained little wheeze as she deflates against the seat and re-configures her position to sit upright again. She reaches up behind her head, twiddling with a green ribbon that ties one of her pigtails up--it's patterned, slightly, with the impression of the petals of a four-leaf-clover. If she's asked, it's just a memento, but with the way she tucks it so neatly in her hair, that's clearly a bluff. It is not simply a good-luck charm, and if it was that would mean she had completed a Trial, and she hadn't even gotten close yet. It was a reminder to her, one that she cannot forget. Because without Lady Luck, to her, she would not have gotten this far. Many things in life are fated, but even more are based on the flip of a coin somewhere unseen. Her survival was lucky. Her gaining a family was even more of a chance scenario. If fate is immovable, luck is unstoppable, and the combination of two is the irrationality that Kitty believes she lives in. "But even if Luck smiled on him, he took it for granted, and now here we are. I'm disappointed. But--"

She pauses for a moment, and then shrugs, poking at the wood of the wagon seat just to find a spot where the wood splinters upward. The movement seems... purposeful. In reality, she's trying to pick the wood out, trying to see if the bark beneath her tights matches the wood of the wagon. It's a habit she does often--one that follows her from childhood. It is, in essence, an attempt to feel natural in the face of the circumstance of her existence. She finds herself drawn to knife-throwing because of the same reason. She supposes it's mostly for the act of creating the targets, not so much attacking. In another life, maybe she'd be a woodcarver, a carpenter, someone who feels at home among the lumbar and leaves. But here? Now? She finds what comfort she can in the act of creating a simple target. It makes people excited, and that truly is all she can ask for.

"If he didn't, I wouldn't get to go off and have such fun, now would I?"

Character Name: Kitty Grandine

Character Race: Fey-Touched

Character Age: 22

Brief Physical Description: Peach-colored eyes hidden behind brown hair that mimics the bark that sits beneath her clothes and on her hands, she dons a green-colored outfit that alludes to her life within the circus. Knives and trinkets are strapped on her legs, yet her clothes remain bare of armor, mobility prioritized above all else.

Image of Skin and Figura Model:

Kitty Grandine Skin

Hello! My name is Blinx, and I'll be handling your whitelist application.

I'll need no edits to Kitty's skin or appearance, as both are satisfactory with the server's lore. In the reply section, however, I'm going to ask for some edits to the Compendium terms currently included. Kitty mentions it being "difficult to get in trouble for little mischief", but the culture she references coming from -- the Falstoners -- are those who historically banded together because they were sick of being toyed with by the Fey. As a result, the culture is friendly but often superstitious and suspicious of external manipulation. As a result, it's not quite in line with the culture's canon.

As a result, I'm going to ask you do another pass of the reply section to include a few more references to other Compendium pages. This could include Lady Luck (which just got updated!), revising the dialogue about Fallstone, referencing something about the Spire or Kitty's feelings about being Fey Touched -- but as it stands, while well-composed I need a bit more referencing the setting before I can let the application through.

Let me know when you've made the changes requested by replying here, so I'll be notified and can get back to you quickly!

Hello! Thank you for looking it over. I have made the requested edits! So sorry, I had misread the information about the Fallstoner lore, so that should be solved. If there is anything else you would like me to add or rewrite to include, let me know and I'll fix it immediately. 

As another note--I decided to change her appearance just slightly to change her eye color to a more yellow-gold. I colorpicked the new color from the Fey-Touched information sheet and have added it to this reply for ease of access. If you would prefer I go with the first color, that is alright! I still have the original file.

Yellow-gold will work fine, if you'd rather that colour!

~ [ Welcome! ] ~

Your whitelist application has been accepted! The server is currently running on Minecraft version 1.20.4, and can be joined by connecting with the IP: mc.avalore.net.

Basic plugin, mod, and Figura information can be found under the Guides section of the Forum. There's also an excellent write-up by community member Pyrias which is designed to help newcomers get started and connected, readable here.

I'd also recommend taking a look at Character Profiles. There you can find information on other players' characters as well as make a profile for your own, or read the in-character journals and other writings related to them. Remember to join the Discord here, as well.

Should you ever have any questions you can ask on the Discord in the appropriate channels, make a Ticket, or reach out to a member of the Community team!