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Approved Application - ethana40 [Approved - Moony]
Started by ethana40

OOC

Minecraft Username: ethana40

Are you at least 18 years old?: Yes, age 23

Have you read the rules? (Link): Yes

(Optional) How did you hear about Avalore?:

minecraftservers.org looking for RP servers, visited server websites and this one looked interesting.

(Max. 1) Were you referred by someone? If so, please provide their in-game username:

I was not

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins): 

Hello!  My name is Ethan.  I am from the US, I am normally EST but for the next few months I will be CST. 

I have done lots of RP on other games before, but none on Minecraft, so I thought it would be interesting to try.  I primarily RPed on Life Is Feudal, before the game died, just in case anybody is aware of that game. 

I am also very interested in history, right now my latest history obsession is the timeframe between 1336 and the 1800s.  I try to use real life historical knowledge to try and make my RP more realistic.

I have always liked building, and have recently gotten back in to building.  I hope that I can make some interesting builds that fit in with the server.

I am also learning Mandarin Chinese right now, just a fun fact about me for context on who I am as a person.

I hope this self introduction was helpful in getting to know me a bit, it was probably all over the place, but let me know if there is anything else you would like to know about me!

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The sound of clinking glasses and idle chatter welcome you in as you find yourself stepping into The Full Cask. An older man with a full mustache and warm smile beckons you over to the bar he's tending. His gazes washes over you, a glint of some knowing look shining in his eyes. As you sit, his voice rumbles out:

"Hello there stranger! What can I get for you?" 

After you order, he continues to make small talk. "You must be a newcomer. I'm Maarten, glad to meet you." He says with a certain kindness in his tone. 

"Tell me, what brings you to the Spire?"

 

How do you respond (in character)(250 word minimum - please make sure to include at least three references to our lore in your response, with two coming from different pages in the Compendium.  Two of the three selected should also be in-depth, avoid simply name-dropping lore terms. Tie the terms into your character's backstory. Why are they important to them?)

Usage of AI to generate, modify or translate the writing on your application will result in denial of your whitelist. There will be no chance to re-apply afterwards.

Your Response:

Adrien offers the innkeeper a polite nod, placing a few coins upon the counter.

"May the Sun shine upon you.  A mug of ale, if you would."

After the drink is poured and served, he raises it slightly in greeting, responding to Maarten's introduction.

"Adrien de Valcour. A pleasure, Maarten."

At the question, he pauses for a moment.

"Curiosity, mostly. I was born in the Duchy of Rulan, not far from The Wall. It's difficult to grow up there without hearing its history. Every child is taught how it brought an end to the old Aedall raids and became the Empire's southern gate. Strange, then, that I'd spent 26 years living in its shadow without ever setting foot beyond it.”

He takes a sip from his mug.

"With so many stories now coming north from the Spire and the settlements of the Southern Reach, I decided it was finally time to satisfy my curiosity rather than rely on merchants' tales. Much of my time with the Red Fist Artillery Corps was spent in the north, where the winters seem determined to outlast the wars themselves. By the time I laid down my commission, I'd had my fill of snow, sieges, and marching."

He takes a longer sip, finishing off the mug of ale.

"Rulan has long been known for what it builds. Men remember the Wall as a fortress, but to us it has always been a point of pride.  A testament to what patience, stone, and skilled hands can accomplish. After eight years devoted to tearing walls and fortresses down, I find the notion of building something rather more appealing."

Character Name:  Adrien de Valcour

Character Race: Human, of the Valk culture

Character Age: 26

 Brief Physical Description:  Adrien is a young Valkian man of average height with a lean, athletic build shaped more by military service than manual labor. He has chestnut brown hair, kept slightly longer in the front, and warm hazel eyes that often seem more observant than expressive. His features are clean cut and youthful, though carrying the quiet confidence expected of a noble officer.  He carries himself with straight posture, measured movements, and the composed demeanor of someone of noble birth trained to command.

 

Hello, I'm Moony and I'll be handling your application. There's a few minor discrepencies that need to be changed before I can continue with your application!

1) You mentioned the "Artillery Corps" of the Red Fists. There's no mention of this in Lore, so that will need to be changed.

2) You note in Adrien's appearance that he has "...the composed demeanor of someone of noble birth trained to command". Can you clarify if you're implying that Adrien is of noble birth, and if he is then we will need to discuss the limits of his backstory. 

If you have any questions, concerns, or need clarification I believe we spoke on Discord already, so feel free to reach out there!

Your Response:

Adrien offers the innkeeper a polite nod, placing a few coins upon the counter.

"May the Sun shine upon you.  A mug of ale, if you would."

After the drink is poured and served, he raises it slightly in greeting, responding to Maarten's introduction.

"Adrien de Valcour. A pleasure, Maarten."

At the question, he pauses for a moment.

"Curiosity, mostly. I was born in the Duchy of Rulan, not far from The Wall. It's difficult to grow up there without hearing its history. Every child is taught how it brought an end to the old Aedall raids and became the Empire's southern gate. Strange, then, that I'd spent 26 years living in its shadow without ever setting foot beyond it.”

He takes a sip from his mug.

"With so many stories now coming north from the Spire and the settlements of the Southern Reach, I decided it was finally time to satisfy my curiosity rather than rely on merchants' tales. Much of my time with the Red Fists was spent in the north, where the winters seem determined to outlast the wars themselves. By the time I laid down my commission, I'd had my fill of snow, sieges, and marching."

He takes a longer sip, finishing off the mug of ale.

"Rulan has long been known for what it builds. Men remember the Wall as a fortress, but to us it has always been a point of pride.  A testament to what patience, stone, and skilled hands can accomplish. After eight years devoted to tearing walls and fortresses down, I find the notion of building something rather more appealing."


 

I removed the bit about the "Artillery Corps".  I changed it to just generically being in the Red Fists.  What I had intended by that, is that Adrien was in whichever component of the Red Fists holds its artillery (Trebuchets, bombards, ballistae, etc.).  Presumably a force of roughly 100,000 would be well organized and in different components.  A military force would logically need to be organized in such a way, especially if it is of that size and serves a massive empire.

 

When I say that Adrien is of "noble birth", I am intending it to be a very small and obscure minor noble family from the duchy.  Not one of any considerable or noteworthy power, just enough wealth and influence to ensure that the family members of the house get into somewhat powerful positions.  Again, in the grand scheme of things, not powerful enough to have any large scale, meaningful influence.  I'm referring to low level bureaucrats, junior military officers, maybe a good position in a local merchant guild. 

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