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Approved Whitelist Application - InvertaCreator [APPROVED - BLIINX]
Started by InvertaCreator

OOC

Minecraft Username: InvertaCreator

Are you at least 18 years old?: Yes

Have you read the rules? (Link): Yes

(Optional) How did you hear about Avalore?: A friend.

(Max. 1) Were you referred by someone? If so, please provide their in-game username: Vegancomedy, though they do not play on the server yet.

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins): I am Inverta, I study entomology and like science and fantasy, often mixing the two together. I also make skins! The skin and figura model for this character were both made by me!

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The sound of clinking glasses and idle chatter welcome you in as you find yourself stepping into The Full Cask. An older man with a full mustache and warm smile beckons you over to the bar he's tending. His gazes washes over you, a glint of some knowing look shining in his eyes. As you sit, his voice rumbles out:

"Hello there stranger! What can I get for you?" 

After you order, he continues to make small talk. "You must be a newcomer. I'm Maarten, glad to meet you." He says with a certain kindness in his tone. 

"Tell me, what brings you to the Spire?"

 

How do you respond (in character)(250 word minimum - please make sure to include at least three references to our lore in your response, with two coming from different pages in the Compendium.  Two of the three selected should also be in-depth, avoid simply name-dropping lore terms. Tie the terms into your character's backstory. Why are they important to them?)

Usage of AI to generate, modify or translate the writing on your application will result in denial of your whitelist. There will be no chance to re-apply afterwards.

Your Response:

Chimes rang as the figure entered The Full Cask, sitting down at the bar as prompted and removing the source of the ambient ring, placing the wide-brim hat with chimes strung along its rim on the edge of the seat beside him. His face was obscured, covered in a nickel-alloy mask, the visage of a stoic face with a neutral expression taking place of any emotion to be seen from the stranger. He ordered his drink: a hot mug of tea, sipping it through the mouth slot of his mask and setting it down, nodding his head. "It is pleasure meeting you, Maarten. I am Yvahnka." He introduced himself in a muffled, but clear accent of a Northerner, gauntleted hands gently holding his mug of tea. 

"Those of south may say I am missionary. However, title of Sin Eater is far different. I have visited few places before. . . Other than Abbey in mountains of Baruide, I've arrived to Southern Reach by way of farmland in Faded Steppe. " He began to explain, reaching to his belt by his waist and pulling a leather-back book from it, placing it on the counter. He slid it forward, turning it to show Maarten. The book read "THE CHOICE OF SIN" in bold gold lettering, Yvahnka crossing his arms and leaning back "Sin Eater's are members of abbey who committed great sin, making redemption impossible through eyes of ancestors. To bring good into world, they take sins of others onto self, damning their own soul in exchange. My duty was completed in Stonebrook, having laid to rest the sinners I could aid" he explained, placing a hand on the book and returning it by his waist, tucked under his belt. 

"I am not unique. Dozens of Sin Eater's prevent damnation of other Sinners. Each has different duty. My duty is that of burial rights, and redemption of Undead." he said, tilting his head down as his gaze matched Maarten's, one eye wrinkled, the other clear, barely showing through the dark shadow of his metal mask. "Spire is not safe from Undead. I am here to redeem those ailed with disease of un-life. Infected with sin, they are bound to be shamed by both ancestors and fables alike when reaching final breath." He explained, raising his tea to his mask once more, sipping it and taking the time to appreciate its flavor. "Though, abbey does not take interest in Fables. Boons of worship defeat purpose of Sin Eater, and privilege of doing so is not reserved for sinners. Speaking of purpose, Maarten. . ." He began, setting down his tea. 

"Have the deceased walked the earth in recent times?" He asked, leaning forward with his hands clasped together.

Character Name: Yvankha Gregori

Character Race: Human (Nua Sidhe)

Character Age: 20

Character Height: 5'10

Brief Physical Description: A lean figure of shorter height than most Northerners. He has long brown hair, tied into braids with gold thread. He's adorned in the robes of the abbey, yet his nickel mask, gauntlets, and sabatons mark him as a Sinner. Chimes hang from his wide-brim hat, ringing as he walks, announcing the presence of the Sin Eater.

Image of Skin and Figura Model:

Hello, Invertacreator! My name is Rapture, and I will be handling your Whitelist application. I have a couple of points for you to fix before I can mark this as approved!

- While creative, your response seems to be a lot of personal lore; though the inspiration taken from real world concepts is very nice, we'd like you to focus your application more on /our/ lore. Where have they visited? Do they take any interest in fables or patrons? All good places to start!
-  W
e'd like you to change how many Sin-Eaters there are, as a following with thousands of members would be a significant presence in the world beyond Yvankha. A few dozen would be fine!


Otherwise, your application looks good!

When you've made these edits to your application, you can ping me here or on Discord @CHILDOFRAPTURE. You can also reach out to me for any questions or assistance!

I have made the changes you've requested. Changed the amount of Sin Eater's to a few dozen, mentioned Yvahnka visiting the Faded Steppe and Stonebrook, and added a bit about his and the abbey's opinions of fables

At Rapture's request, I'll be taking over this whitelist. As it stands, I like the revisions to include more of our world (including the named locations!) and can see you've implemented the feedback provided. While not mentioned on the page, the current Server Campaign features a civil war within Fallstone -- a time that could certainly produce undead within the region. 

Do note for now our setting's lore largely has no broad concept of "sin" or "damnation" as they're commonly understood in the real world, however I believe Yvankha's wording makes it sound like an offshoot of the North's existing reverence for their ancestors. As a smaller practice within an existing kingdom, I feel comfortable approving this application with those concepts included as specific parts of the Yvanhka and his abbey's spiritual practices. 

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