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Approved neji101 Whitelist App [Approved - Moony]
Started by neji101

OOC

Minecraft Username: neji101

Are you at least 18 years old?: Yes

Have you read the rules? (Link): Yes

(Optional) Were you referred by someone? If so, who: Hoeftificus

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins): Hello! I'm neji/Lemonade and I've been in the MCRP skin for 8-9 years. Even when I'm not active in the community, I like to make skins in my free time. 

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)(150 words minimum - please make sure to include some references to our lore in your response!)

Olivier was shaken from her reverie with a small start, and she turned her head toward the stranger. Huh- what? What had she asked? Her mind was slow to turn, almost fighting to return to the clouds she'd just been in, the homesickness nibbling at her insides. This was not her first time away from ‘home,’ though it was the first that strayed quite so far; The first that promised to be almost permanent. The wobble of the wagon had her aching for the familiar caravans roaming betwixt the scattered Falstoner communities, the many long days spent on busy paths. Singing, exchanging tricks and trinkets amongst the neighbors while they talked...

With that nibble of anxiety came the tingle of excitement, though. Or perhaps they were one and the same. Latching onto the woman’s question, Olivier chose to make it more of the latter than the former. She hugged her lute to her chest, brushing fingertips along the fine carvings that spanned across what was perhaps her most prized possession at this point, and donned a bright smile one far more confident than she felt. The instrument was her sole piece of her community all the way out here, and she held fast to it as though it lent her strength.

“Figured it was time to spread my wings, so to speak. I am off to see the world while I can.” After all, it was only right that a young adult take a trip and expand her horizons before settling into herself! Sure. Yes. That was it.

Character Name:  Olivier Reyharice

Character Race:  Fey-touched 

Character Age:  25

Brief Physical Description:  Olivier has straw-blonde hair paired with bright blue eyes. Her body is dotted with clusters of feathers that range from lighter reds/pinks to blues and greens. She stands at a relatively modest 5'10, and dresses as brightly as her coin purse allows.

Hello Neji! I'm Moony and I'll be handling your application. Let me start with saying I think you do a fantastic job with skins and they look amazing in the images provided. I also think your In-Character story is well-written.

However, I would really love if you could include a few aspects of the lore from our Compendium in the story. It could be about where Olivier is from, her specific culture, things of that nature. 

If you have any questions or concerns, or simply need some assistance feel free to reach out in this thread, through a PM here on the forums, or through the Discord where I'm also Moony. 

Apologies! 
Edited to expand the mentions of her reminiscing on her caravan and its associated musical habits/customs.

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- Congratulations and Welcome -

Your whitelist application is approved. The server runs on 1.18.2 and you can connect using the IP: mc.avalore.net.

Consider creating a profile for your character in the Character Profiles section of the forums!

If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me or another member of our Community team either on the forums or through our Discord.

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