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Approved illojuant’s application [approved !- COSMIC_EVIL]
Started by juannlinares

OOC

Minecraft Username: illojuant

Are you at least 18 years old?: yes, 20

Have you read the rules? (Link): yes

(Optional) Were you referred by someone? If so, who:

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins): i’m a spanish student and love to play and build in mc, my english may not be very good but i always try my best!!

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)(150 words minimum - please make sure to include some references to our lore in your response!)

I look around with some sadness, and with eyes full of nostalgia, I look back at the old woman.

”When I was just a child, my parents died in a fight between friends outside a tavern. After that, I lived as a sailor’s apprentice in a small lighthouse in the village. I learned everything about the sea and the waves and sails became my new family. However, there was something in my life and in that damn town that didn’t quite fit. I ran away.”

The old lady was silent and listened attentively.

“I hid among powder bags of a small ship that was heading to distant lands. I remember seeing the Mist Islands disappear into the fog as the ship set sail. I didn’t even know where I would end up.

Suddenly I’m here, starting a new life. I’m scared, I’ll be honest. But I know perfectly well that I will become a proper man and sailor. I’m a survivor so I’ll be good.”

Character Name: Orion Grey

Character Race: Human

Character Age: 19

Brief Physical Description: A boy with brunette hair, with tousled and medium-length locks that frame his face. He has some lighter highlights, from sun exposure. He also has cold grey eyes, a pale complexion and a lean and athletic build. 

Hello!!

My name is cosmic_evil and I'll be reviewing your application! The only thing we need to focus on for now before its approved is the backstory, I'm just looking for a bit of clarification added to your character's history with their parents. It says that they were killed during a dispute with their family, but then says that it was a fight with friends in the next part of the sentence! Some clarification on that, and we'll be good with moving forward with your application!

Feel free to message me on discord, or ask in the Help-Desk channel in the discord if you have any questions about this, or just want to discuss the application!!!

thank you,

cosmic_evil

- Congratulations and Welcome -

Your whitelist application is approved. The server runs on 1.18.2 and you can connect using the IP: mc.avalore.net.

Consider creating a profile for your character in the Character Profiles section of the forums!

If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me or another member of our Community team either on the forums or through our Discord.