Minecraft Username:  demon7sword

Are you at least 18 years old?:im 20, yes

Have you read the rules? (Link): yes

(Optional) Were you referred by someone? If so, who:

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins):

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In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)? (150 words minimum - please make sure to include some references to our lore in your response!)

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“I have come to form a nation for me and my nobility, House Reech, we reechians seek to grow in power and favor with the void, after our great exodus we long for a home and I the humble netherprince shall bring my house to glory!”

The young elf stated before sheepishly getting off of the table he stood up on for the sake of theatrics

“Either way, yes it is my first time but more importantly more of my kin are coming”

“I see” the frail women replied “but from where and more importantly what makes you think they stand a chance here?”

The young elf, offended responded with “We come from scarvette a glorious land that we put to our heels after many years we grew bored of our paradise so we commenced a great exodus in order to find a home worthy for our glory” the elf said smiling evilly,

"very well my son" said the old women "Now go, claim this place for house reech!"

Character Name:  Seraax

Character Race:  Dark elf

Character Age: 19

Brief Physical Description: tall, sender with horns and pink and gold eyes

Hi Demon,

Your writing is looking good! However, it doesn't appear you have taken the time to view our lore page [click here]. Please familiarize yourself with Avalore's setting before submitting an application, as there are numerous errors in your application because of this. Try to ensure that your character's race is one based within Avalore's setting (i.e. Arsa Sidhe), adheres to our lore (i.e. Arsa Sidhe do not have horns, but there are half-races you could play to get them) as well as incorporating the pre-existing notable locations within our lore (also found in the Compendium).

I recommend taking a look at our approved applications [link] if you would like examples. Lastly, please feel free to ask any lore-related questions you have in the channel called '#help-desk' in our Discord server.

Please respond to this thread when you have edited your application and I will take another look. Thanks.

Hey I read the page you sent and I was wondering can we come back to this when dark elfs get added since I want this to be my backup rp server or if there is a dark elf equivalent in the server please let me know

demon7sword:

Hey I read the page you sent and I was wondering can we come back to this when dark elfs get added since I want this to be my backup rp server or if there is a dark elf equivalent in the server please let me know

Hi again Demon,

I'm going to decline this application as based on this response it appears you have still not properly read any of our compendium page. Once you have taken a better look at what playable races and traits characters can have as well as our lore, please feel free to re-apply.  You can find our lore compendium page here.