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Approved Whitelist Application - RosesNDisas [Approved - Moony]
Started by RosesNDisas

OOC

Minecraft Username: DrRoseboy

Are you at least 18 years old?: Yes

Have you read the rules? (Link): Yes

(Optional) Were you referred by someone? If so, who: N/A

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins): Howdy, I'm Rose! I'm from South Africa (which means cool cultural differences :3) and have been in numerous different roleplay servers and events, from 1000 player civilization experiments to multiple year long modded lore servers, and thats just Minecraft only!

I am also a professional voice actor, actor and model, so you know I'm good at acting for RP! xD

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)(150 words minimum - please make sure to include some references to our lore in your response!)

— Well... I might aswell tell you the whole story... I don't remember anything from when I was young, but I was taken in by the Fireborne, I followed their customs as I was one of their own but I'm nor Greatling or Fey, yet they treated me like one... I believe the common word is adoption? Anyway, I always of course felt like I didn't belong... I always struggled with the heat of my surroundings... and everyone but my caretakers treated me like an outsider, even though all I knew was to be one of them... Then whilst I was sleeping, I heard shouting and crying, my caretakers were being confronted by 3 Greatlings, blades drawn. Once they saw me they pushed one of my caretakers to the side and charged at me, the other caretaker tripped the charging one and ran to me and pushed down a bookshelf to reveal a small hatch, she told me to go through and not come back until she said to, I listened and closed the hatch... All I could hear from that point on was shouting and screaming as I began crawling through the tunnel, eventually there was a room with a backpack covered in dark dust, and an out of place looking stone, in the backpack was a blood stained map showing the Southern Reach, aswell as an arrow coming from the West, the backpack also held a blade handle, seemingly of the 'Rapier' variety, although ornate and pretty, it doesn't have a blade so I can't use it... I haven't known what to do besides go to where the arrow points... Which is what I'm doing now... To be honest, I don't have a clue on what to do once we reach a settlement... Hopefully wherever we are headed is more welcoming than where I was before, I just wish to not have to be looking over my shoulder constantly you know? Oh and is there anything I should know to do or not to do? I don't want to make any enemies after all!

Character Name: Violet

Character Race: Half-Human, Half-Arsa (50/50 mix)

Character Age: 15

Brief Physical Description: 5'3, thin framed but has a decent amount of muscle, pale rose skin with some burn marks scattered about, grey eyes and straight, long Violet hair.

 

Hey there Rose!

I'm Moony and I'll be handling your application today.

So far the application is on the right track. There's a few things I think we need to rectify though before we can proceed with the application. Both Humans (Nua-Side) and Arsa-Side (Elves) lack the ability to have violet/purple hair. If you're able to provide some way that she could plausibly dye her hair in such a color then we can discuss that further. 

I would also love if you could do a little more inclusion of lore inthe written portion. You mention her being in the Fireborne culture, and say she was adopted. If you could maybe give a little more on that, or discuss some other aspects of lore related to her culture or what she knows then I think we'll be in a great spot to proceed with the application. Feel free to reference our Compendium again if you need some more ideas.

If there's any questions or concerns, feel free to reach out to me on this post, through the forums, or through the Avalore Discord where you can DM me. I'm also Moony there. 

I look forward to your response!

Minecraft Username: DrRoseboy

Are you at least 18 years old?: Yes

Have you read the rules? (Link): Yes

(Optional) Were you referred by someone? If so, who: N/A

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins): Howdy, I'm Rose! I'm from South Africa (which means cool cultural differences :3) and have been in numerous different roleplay servers and events, from 1000 player civilization experiments to multiple year long modded lore servers, and thats just Minecraft only!

I am also a professional voice actor, actor and model, so you know I'm good at acting for RP! xD

In-Character
Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)? (150 words minimum - please make sure to include some references to our lore in your response!)

— Well... I might aswell tell you the whole story... I don't remember anything from when I was young, but I was taken in by the Fireborne, I followed their customs as I was one of their own but I'm nor Greatling or Fey, yet they treated me like one... I believe the common word is adoption? Anyway, I always of course felt like I didn't belong... I always struggled with the heat of my surroundings, the monsters and the travelling, you'd think that you'd stay in one safe location but no we just HAD to keep moving into more and more danger! Eventually, whilst going to do prayers, me and my best friend Clairbis got ambushed by a group of monsters, I instantly began running away thinking Clair would follow... But she was so focused on her prayer that by the time she realised she was in danger it was already too late... I'll never forget her eyes fading away... *sob* I'm sorry I'll get back to it... I was then brought fourth to some important old people, no offence, and they all started accusing me of so many things... First it was that I set it up, then that I was a coward, then that I wasn't one of them! I cursed all of them out, and even the Fire Dragon for just seeking to further my suffering and I ran home and collapsed into my bed crying. I wokeup before the sun dawned to shouting and crying, my caretakers were being confronted by 3 Greatlings, blades drawn. Once they saw me they pushed one of my caretakers to the side and charged at me, the other caretaker tripped the charging one and ran to me and pushed down a bookshelf to reveal a small hatch, she told me to go through and not come back until she said to, I listened and closed the hatch... All I could hear from that point on was shouting and screaming as I began crawling through the tunnel, eventually there was a room with a backpack covered in dark dust, and an out of place looking stone, in the backpack was a blood stained map showing the Southern Reach, aswell as an arrow coming from the West, the backpack also held a blade handle, seemingly of the 'Rapier' variety, although ornate and pretty, it doesn't have a blade so I can't use it... I haven't known what to do besides go to where the arrow points... Which is what I'm doing now... To be honest, I don't have a clue on what to do once we reach a settlement... Hopefully wherever we are headed is more welcoming than where I was before, I just wish to not have to be looking over my shoulder constantly you know? Oh and is there anything I should know to do or not to do? I don't want to make any enemies after all!

Character Name: Rosith

Character Race: Half-Human, Half-Arsa (50/50 mix)

Character Age: 15

Brief Physical Description: 5'3, thin framed but has a decent amount of muscle, pale rose skin with some burn scars scattered about, grey-blue eyes and straight, long pink hair. (redhead human parent, silver haired Arsa parent mix)

 

Minecraft Username: DrRoseboy

Are you at least 18 years old?: Yes

Have you read the rules? (Link): Yes

(Optional) Were you referred by someone? If so, who: N/A

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins): Howdy, I'm Rose! I'm from South Africa (which means cool cultural differences :3) and have been in numerous different roleplay servers and events, from 1000 player civilization experiments to multiple year long modded lore servers, and thats just Minecraft only!

I am also a professional voice actor, actor and model, so you know I'm good at acting for RP! xD

In-Character
Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)? (150 words minimum - please make sure to include some references to our lore in your response!)

— Well... I might aswell tell you the whole story... I don't remember anything from when I was young, but I was taken in by the Fireborne, I followed their customs as I was one of their own but I'm nor Greatling or Fey, yet they treated me like one... I believe the common word is adoption? Anyway, I always of course felt like I didn't belong... I always struggled with the heat of my surroundings, the monsters and the travelling, you'd think that you'd stay in one safe location but no we just HAD to keep moving into more and more danger! Eventually, whilst going to do prayers, me and my best friend Clairbis got ambushed by a group of monsters, I instantly began running away thinking Clair would follow... But she was so focused on her prayer that by the time she realised she was in danger it was already too late... I'll never forget her eyes fading away... *sob* I'm sorry I'll get back to it... I was then brought fourth to some important old people, no offence, and they all started accusing me of so many things... First it was that I set it up, then that I was a coward, then that I wasn't one of them! I cursed all of them out, and even the Fire Dragon for just seeking to further my suffering and I ran home and collapsed into my bed crying. I wokeup before the sun dawned to shouting and crying, my caretakers were being confronted by 3 Greatlings, blades drawn. Once they saw me they pushed one of my caretakers to the side and charged at me, the other caretaker tripped the charging one and ran to me and pushed down a bookshelf to reveal a small hatch, she told me to go through and not come back until she said to, I listened and closed the hatch... All I could hear from that point on was shouting and screaming as I began crawling through the tunnel, eventually there was a room with a backpack covered in dark dust, and an out of place looking stone, in the backpack was a blood stained map showing the Southern Reach, aswell as an arrow coming from the West, the backpack also held a blade handle, seemingly of the 'Rapier' variety, although ornate and pretty, it doesn't have a blade so I can't use it... I haven't known what to do besides go to where the arrow points... Which is what I'm doing now... To be honest, I don't have a clue on what to do once we reach a settlement... Hopefully wherever we are headed is more welcoming than where I was before, I just wish to not have to be looking over my shoulder constantly you know? Oh and is there anything I should know to do or not to do? I don't want to make any enemies after all!

Character Name: Rosith

Character Race: Half-Human, Half-Arsa (50/50 mix)

Character Age: 15

Brief Physical Description: 5'3, thin framed but has a decent amount of muscle, pale rose skin with some burn scars scattered about, grey-blue eyes and straight, long silver hair. (redhead human parent, silver haired Arsa parent

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