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Approved BooshKadooshOof Whitelist [Approved - Moony]
Started by BooshKadooshOof

OOC

Minecraft Username: BooshKadooshOof, Skeleton_Father

Are you at least 18 years old?: Ya

Have you read the rules? (Link): Ya

(Optional) Were you referred by someone? If so, who: Gwylgi, DinoSipsCoffee, 

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins): All in due time...

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)(150 words minimum - please make sure to include at least three references to our lore in your response, with two coming from different pages in the Compendium.  Two of the three selected should also be in-depth, avoid simply name-dropping lore terms. Tie the terms into your character's backstory. Why are they important to them?)

 He looks off from the cart. Across the rolling hills and landscape. He takes in this side of the Wall he's never seen. "I've come to the Reach, as one of the last of my family. My family comes from a long line of knights and warriors, men who would lay down their lives on the Wall, and men who led famous Knightly orders to train others. We've fought in wars with the Aedall, but above all, we've always sworn ourselves by our valor and honor. Over time our name and histories have faded into legend and obscurity much like many of the people in Rulan. Have you been across the Wall? The land is not what it once was. My people there, scouring for whatever wealth and glory they can achieve or take for themselves. It isn't something to look to with pride." He pauses and sighs, adjusting his armor that was beside him. "I intend on making a pilgrimage to receive the Ladys blessing. The Lady of the Lake that is. Many of my family had done the same pilgrimage before, but in recent times, less and less people from across the Wall have gone. Once I make my pilgrimage I will swear my self to her service to honor that history, and to defend the innocent and helpless, regardless of payment.

Character Name: Gallavan Aster

Character Race: Human, Valkian

Character Age: 21

Brief Physical Description: Gallavan is tall and broad shouldered, not overly muscled but well-built with an Ectomorph, bordering on Mesomorph, build. He has a fairly tanned complexion from extensive wandering and travel and has long, neck length, sun kissed blonde colored hair. He has green eyes that are more muted than bright.

Hello, I'm Moony and I'm going to be helping you with your application. Let me first start by apologizing for how long it has taken for me to get back to you on this. 

So far you're on the right track. However, we need to rectify a few things before I can continue processing this application. One thing is, could you describe more what you had in mind for the Aster family and the Aster Knights? I need to ensure it properly aligns with the lore we've written and that the family isn't too powerful, storied, etc.

Another thing is I would like if you could write a bit more about the lore you've selected. You mention Lady of the Lakes, The Wall, and Rulan, but don't' really tie them into your story too heavily. If you could go into more detail about what these mean for your character, that would be lovely. It doesn't have to directly be dialogue either, you can do thoughts as well. 

If you have any questions or concerns please feel free to reach out to me in this thread, on the forums, or through Avalore's Discord where I am also Moony. 

 

- Congratulations and Welcome -

Your whitelist application is approved. The server runs on 1.18.2 and you can connect using the IP: mc.avalore.net.

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