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Denied GhostyMirage's Whitelist App [DENIED- Zoslore]
Started by GhostyMirage

OOC

Minecraft Username: GhostyMirage

Are you at least 18 years old?: Yes

Have you read the rules? (Link): Yes

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)(150 words minimum - please make sure to include at least three references to our lore in your response, with two coming from different pages in the Compendium.  Two of the three selected should also be in-depth, avoid simply name-dropping lore terms. Tie the terms into your character's backstory. Why are they important to them?)

Lucinda was huddled attempting to keep to herself throughout most of the journey thus far. Upon letting out a bit of a jolt when spoken to, her green eyes would shift over looking on the elderly woman. A bit of an anxious smile would be sent her way in an attempt to try and keep polite. "Oh yeah, I'm feeling a bit nervous I suppose, this is nothing like I've done before." She admits. "I was raised around Mistran, I'm much more used to being around course rough waters, the smell of salt in the air." She describes with a soft laugh. "I washed up on their shores as a small child. It is not usually for a non-human to be from there I know, but I got brought up as one of their own. "A part of that means my coming of age, I set off on an adventure after making a small boat of my own to set off." 

Lucinda took a small pause to reminisce a chuckle leaves her before she then continues. "I came here as part of my coming of age to find something worth bringing back home. I've heard a lot of stories about places of the Reach in my journies so far, and I think there is something worth finding around the Spire. With so much mystery and intrigue about that town, about why it is even like how it is, surely there's something worth finding for my home." She smiles. "If I can truly reach the Spire, I want to try and uncover what it is made out of, and why it was made in the first place. that should be more than a good story for Mistran to hear!" 

Character Name: Lucinda Mirvaris 

Character Race: Ara Sidhe (Elf)

Character Age: 18

Brief Physical Description: Lucinda is a red-haired elfess who stands at an uncommon height for her race of 5'3". As a result, she often has a fairly frail and sickly appearance. She is usually prone to catching colds and other sicknesses, and her body has a weak immune system. She has long, wild, firey red vibrant hair that stands out against her lightly tanned skin, and maroon branch-like tattoos cover the majority of her body. She typically brings herself with a warm happy demeanor, having a knack for being what many would call aloof.

 

Hello! My name is cosmic_evil and I'll be reviewing your application.

We are going to go ahead and approve this- however I will advise you that for your character's phsyical description; 5'5 is the minimum height for Elves, and since that sort of red hair isn't typical for an elf you will want to come up with some kind of reasoning for why your character has that hair. It could be dyed, or even a unique part of their heritage. Just make sure that you have some kind of an explanation for it!

 

- Congratulations and Welcome -

Your whitelist application is approved. The server runs on 1.18.2 and you can connect using the IP: mc.avalore.net.

Consider creating a profile for your character in the Character Profiles section of the forums!

If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me or another member of our Community team either on the forums or through our Discord.

This application has been denied. Reason: [Ban report link]

-= Parsnip || Merrily =-