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Approved Whitelisting UsuallyBlue [Approved - Dinomono]
Started by UsuallyBlue

Minecraft Username: UsuallyBlue

Are you at least 18 years old?: yes

Have you read the rules? (Link): yes

(Optional) How did you hear about Avalore?: Thru a friend!

(Max. 1) Were you referred by someone? If so, please provide their in-game username: Jamook (he isnt part of the server yet but will be joining soon)

(Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins):

In-Character

Read the following prompt:

The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands.

“Nervous?”

You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes.

“I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in.

“Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?”

How do you respond (in character)(250 word minimum - please make sure to include at least three references to our lore in your response, with two coming from different pages in the Compendium.  Two of the three selected should also be in-depth, avoid simply name-dropping lore terms. Tie the terms into your character's backstory. Why are they important to them?)

My Response in-character:


Looks away while answering, "Not really, I'm glad i can restart here, actually. "

Staring at the floor boards, notices I've been day dreaming, then quickly looks back at the older women. Stays quiet for a bit wondering if I should even answer or just keep it to myself. "Is it that obvious I'm not from around here? I guess that doesnt suprise me. I was never really able to hide myself back then either. I mean look at me, I never blended in with the other Korami, seeing I never wanted to fight like the others do." I say in a mocking tone while playing with the knife in my hand, emblazened with a hand-carved symbol of Aedall.

"I... wanted to leave my last... life behind, I guess. People back there never really accepted me, so I'm hoping for a fresh start here." I tug on my long sleeve to fix it. "People around me always told me that my life would have no meaning. I know that may sound dumb, but that was always very important to everyone back where I'm from."

She keeps playing with the knife, the older women notices the symbol. she asks "is that knife from the Aedall's?" I quickly put it away in my boot "No, i tried to make it look like their symbol but it didnt work out. When i was in the Spire i thought i saw a look a like symbol in their library, but im second guessing if that was even what the symbol looked like back then. I gues we will never know."

 

Character Name: Aimee Valryx

Character Race: Arsa Sidhe (elf)

Character Age: 23

Brief Physical Description: Long white hair (ends at hip height). Red Eyes. She wears a long red like hood/cape. With black top/shorts. and long black boots. She always carries a small knife in her left boot. She also coverd in healed scars all over her body. is 5'11

Hello, I'm Dinomono and I'll be reviewing your application! So far it's looking good, but there are a few things I'll need you to correct before I can approve you.

- An overall grammar check on the application

- The requirements of lore references within apps are to include at least three references from the compendium, two of those in-depth, two of those from different pages within the compendium. So far, your character's gone in-depth with their relationship to the Korami people, and you have shown through narrations that she's falsified an Aedall symbol into her knife. To fulfill the minimum lore requirements here another lore reference, of a different page to the 'cultures' one, would have to be mentioned. Then, to include depth (By this I mean, how do these parts of our lore relate to your character/what their opinion might be on these) to either the Aedall knife mention or this new one to be added.

Once the required changes have been made, please respond to this thread so that we can continue.

🙈🙉🙊

- Signed by Moogy

I hope i did it... 😅 and for the grammar part i hope i did that aswell. english isnt my first language

- Welcome! -

Your whitelist application is approved. The server runs on 1.20.4 and you can connect using the IP: mc.avalore.net.

Here's some Guides on how our main in-game plugins can be used, and our Mechanics page for an overview on how the system works.

Consider creating a profile for your character in the Character Profiles section of the forums!

If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me or another member of our Community team either on the forums or through our Discord.

🙈🙉🙊

- Signed by Moogy