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LD_Fable
LD_Fable
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paolumu: Hello! I'm Lumu, and I'll be taking this whitelist There's quite a few issues I'd like to address:- To lessen OOC bleed, we require applications and server roleplay to be written in third person instead of first person- Furthermore on the above point, I ask that your character name is changed to be distinguishable from your OOC name. This is also to avoid player confusion when speaking about you or your character- To be safe; I'd like to ask for a little more in depth elaboration on two of the three points. - Your writing is also relatively difficult to read as it's one big chunk of text. For some added readability I'd like to ask for some paragraphing- You also seemed to have posted your application twice! I request that the duplicate one be deleted. Once the requested edits have been made, leave a reply and I'll get back to you as soon as I'm able! And if you have any questions, feel free to ask in the discord! I am done with the edits and i hope its up to standard now :D
2 months ago
OOC Minecraft Username: LD_Fable Are you at least 18 years old?: I am 20 Have you read the rules? (Link): yes(Optional) How did you hear about Avalore?: Modrinth server list.(Max. 1) Were you referred by someone? If so, please provide their in-game username: nope (Optional) Introduce yourself if you’d like, as well as any creations you want to share (e.g. art, builds, skins): Hi I am Fable, I like playing Minecraft engineering mods and medieval mods too :D.  — In-Character Read the following prompt: The rhythmic lull of hoofbeats are a marching drum to the small group of pioneers and variety of folk you have found yourself amongst, packed into a wobbling wagon. The rolling plains of the Southern Reach and a clear sky stretch out all around you, the buzz of excited chatter a dull wash in your ears as your mind strays to your former life and what has led you here to new lands. “Nervous?” You blink, returning to the present moment. A kindly older woman sat near you is smiling warmly with a crinkle to her eyes. “I can tell it’s your first time. Still remember mine,” she flashes a grin and leans in. “Tell me my dear, why have you come to the Reach?” How do you respond (in character)? While the low rumbling sound of the wagon wheels and drum like sound of the horses, who are dragging the wooden wagon to the destination of a new world for Adonis, bumping to the small pebbles and Granules of the dirt road, I look at the sweet older woman and smile nervously while replying to her: "Well didn't know it was that noticeable that I am new to this. However, I came, from a village under the Serene Monarchy faction, to the Reach for a fresh start, a new part of my story to write on this book that is called life." Then he says under his breath: "And I might have been kicked out of my village as punishment for my long history of pranks." Which he ended with a nervous smirk at the end of the sentence. After some time, Adonis started talking more about why he wanted to go to the southern Reach: "When I heard about the reach from some travelers at my old village, I just fantasized about the vast golden fields and the place that has been repurposed into a town, I think it was called the Spire if I recall it correctly, I really want to see the city and its history and try the cuisein there. And I really hope we stop at Albern Crossing, I really want to see the hub of travelers of the Southern Reach!" Adonis said enthusiastically while he couldn't contain his excitement. "Just thinking about it makes me jump from excitement!" He said while somewhat jumping in his seat, which made the wagon shake more above the unsteadiness of the road.  Adonis then started noticing a huge, long, flat structure. He then said: "Is this the structure that everyone keeps calling The Wall by any chance!?" He said with wonder gleeming in his eyes. He continued asking about how it was made, for how many years did it stand triumphant infront of the battles that possibly happened in the area. "I can't wait to learn about everything in the Southern Reach!" He said while trying to contain his energy. Usage of AI to generate, modify or translate the writing on your application will result in denial of your whitelist. There will be no chance to re-apply afterwards. — Character Name: Adonis Character Race: Half-Race (Human and Greatling) Character Age: 20  Brief Physical Description: 7'5, with human ears, bulky muscles, brownish black eyes, and scruffy hair. Image of Skin and Figure Model:
2 months ago
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